A&P Well this is my new draw

Discussion in 'Lifestyle' started by MOD1st, Nov 3, 2003.

  1. MOD1st

    MOD1st Guest

    I don't like the pants.
    Waya think?
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  2. 2.5RS

    2.5RS Guest

    Pretty good for a young beginner.

    Needs a light source. And the pants are to flat.
     
  3. 2.5RS

    2.5RS Guest

    One of mine:

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  4. MOD1st

    MOD1st Guest

    Very nice.
    Acrilyc? Oil pastel?
     
  5. 2.5RS

    2.5RS Guest

    Acyrlic on wood. I can PM you my web site if you would like.
     
  6. MOD1st

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    I have more.
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  7. MOD1st

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    Danm i hate red x.
     
  8. MOD1st

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    Give me.
     
  9. MOD1st

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  10. 2.5RS

    2.5RS Guest

    Can't get to them dude.
     
  11. MOD1st

    MOD1st Guest

    I don't know what is wrong. :S
     
  12. MOD1st

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  14. 2.5RS

    2.5RS Guest

    I see those ones.

    You asked for opinions so here it goes.

    You are working very flat, it is a mistake that a lot of young artists make when working from pictures. You need to introduce a strong light source even if the picture you are working from does not have one.

    It also looks like you are using the same pencil throughout the drawing. Try using dif. pencils there is a reason why there are so many of them.

    How old are you?
     
  15. MOD1st

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  16. 2.5RS

    2.5RS Guest


    Well, I have seen drawings of your skill level from students in high school.

    Have you ever taken an art class?
     
  17. MOD1st

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  19. MOD1st

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    I retouch it.
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  20. 2.5RS

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    Something is not right about the breast area of her shirt.
     
  21. MOD1st

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    Yes the shadow in the left.
    is supose to be more dark down the left tit.
     
  22. DejaVooDoo

    DejaVooDoo *Jojo*

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    I understand what you are trying to do with the shirt, but it has TOO many wrinkles/creases. Try to work on the pants and not the shirt. Good job nontheless.
     
  23. MOD1st

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    Thanks
     

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