A&P wedding pictures *c&c* v. first attempt

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  1. xenon supra

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    I was not hired as a photog for the wedding, it was my girlfriend's aunt's wedding and I just brought my camera along like I always do.

    Plus I do have interest in shooting some weddings for some extra cash, so I figured it would be good to have some shots to show as examples of my work.

    Here are a few of the ones that I liked, I didn't know the bride or groom very well, so I never directed them in any way, I just worked around the other photog that was there.


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  2. xenon supra

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    Oh yeah, all shot with D300 and 28-70 f/2.8
    It was the only lens I had with me :o
     
  3. OlafBeserka

    OlafBeserka girls pee pee when they see me OT Supporter

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    #7 is awkward because you cant tell where that hand is.

    the vignette in #2 is too dramatic
     
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    8 looks like she's got a klenex up her nose
     
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    iDrive OTAP crew. Muradadog crew. GO GATORS!

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    sorry, the only one I like is the 1st one. :\

    2. already stated by 95blue240sx
    3. Needs tighter crop.
    4. Personally don't care for the composition. :dunno:
    5. meh
    6. don't like composition or background
    7. agree with 95blue240sx again
    8. decent. nothing stands out about this pic though.

    keep shooting bro
     
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    #3 needs much tighter crop.

    How old are they? :eek4:
     
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    iDrive OTAP crew. Muradadog crew. GO GATORS!

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    its, ok bro. If I posted my stuff on here, it would get ripped up

    :hugot:
     
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    I have a tighter crop of this pic, I just liked the way this one looked better.

    They are like 45-50 I think. Both 2nd marriages :hs:
     
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    really flat, needs more contrast and saturation
    1 too much vignette, ring needs to be more clear
    2 flat, random thing coming out of her head in the background, looks major 70's, her hands are really stiff
    3 dead space at that angle is boring, get low to the ground to get some sky
    4 over exposed
    5 over exposed, major CA
    6 old people don't like tilts, his arm needs to do something, he look stiff
    7 flat, random ass grab? needs her hand to make it work
    8 is just awkward with the boutonniere in her face
     
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    They look more like 60+ years old...

    I don't know why you even posted #7.
     
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    because I like the picture. :eek4:
     

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