A&P wedding photos

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  1. c0ldf1ame

    c0ldf1ame New Member

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    i just came back from a friends wedding, and took my camera and got a bunch of shots, wish i had a faster glass =\ cuz most of my shots came out blurry, and high ISO ftl :wtc:


    anyways heres some i like

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  2. johan

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    1, 2 awkward angle, you've hidden a groomsman. Light is flat and insipid

    3 oof, badly so. light is harsh and unflattering as is her expression. her face is garishly underlit, like a campside flashlight retelling scawwy stories. Probably not what you were going for.

    4 is the best of what you've shown

    5 crop out those distracting backs of heads

    6 recrop it to remove the negative space right of the groom. The composition shown makes the viewer uncomfortable

    The entire shot would have worked better with the entire cake showing, and the groom at the right edge of frame.

    Do you have another shot of this where the bride's arm isnt blocking 3/4 of her face? Either right before, or right after the moment you've shown.
     
  3. xenon supra

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    they all look kinda noisy IMO
     
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    Needs more: Focus, flattering angles, timing
    Needs less: Noise, overexposure, ridiculous white space (last two)
     
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    hmm at least you tried.
     

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