MMA Website in the works...critique.

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  1. Hillary

    Hillary fukc yaeh. ew waitled long enough. nujgses of hill

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    Edit, took the link down. Was there for a limited time only. :p
     
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  2. RMarks

    RMarks New Member

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    Do you actually wear those sneakers? :rofl:

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  3. GreatDeceiver

    GreatDeceiver OT Supporter

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    Alright well the first thing is the separation between the navigation at the top and the content at the bottom. I'm not a huge fan of the bars that create the division, I think it could be done in a more subtle and crisp way.

    The sponsors thing at the bottom is kinda extreme, but I'm guessing that sponsors or whatever are a pretty important thing to you/the site so promotion is good, I just don't know if it's necessary to take up 1/3 of every page.

    And the pink text is ok, but gets to be too much against a dark grey background, especially in small font and when you've got alot of it ie. your bio.


    I'm digging the logo however, that's pretty clear and dynamic. The overall feel is pretty clean and modern, but I wouldn't go crazy on the pink, I feel like it makes things somewhat hazy, I dunno hard to explain.

    Looks good though, and you're cute when not competing.
     
  4. Hillary

    Hillary fukc yaeh. ew waitled long enough. nujgses of hill

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    You bet your sweet ass I wear those.

    (bad, yet funny picture)
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  5. energie

    energie I like to place an order.. the name? Situation the

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    works well, stay away from iframes though. The content should be in a table so you only have to scroll once.
     
  6. Matt Hood

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    Website

    fucking

    sucks.

    No just playing, it's actually pretty good. Tho you look like a female, blonde carrot top in some of those pictures.
     
  7. rtzcom

    rtzcom bon wons! fight slepa for life sone!~

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    I will give you my critique in a few hours...
     
  8. The Ripper

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    green and pink clash hoe those have to be the fucking ugliest shoes evar@!@!!!!!!@@#@[email protected]@!!@!!@@[email protected]@!@[email protected]#E@ r fuck yeaj
     
  9. VulgarTheClown

    VulgarTheClown A child and a gun.....go together like apple pie a

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    like this pic alot.
     
  10. VulgarTheClown

    VulgarTheClown A child and a gun.....go together like apple pie a

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    Site looks good so far. Banner is cool.
     
  11. Cheeks

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    same here :o
     
  12. miek

    miek New Member

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    lol im a year older than you, didn't see that coming. you look at least 5 older than me

    very nice site though, i really don't have anything bad to say about it
     
  13. HandgunFantasy

    HandgunFantasy My purity you stole.

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    top is nice.
    something is quite right about how the bottom frame meshes with the top portion. i cant explain it :o
     
  14. chechen

    chechen Brazilian Jiu Jitsu OT Supporter

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    its a well made website
     
  15. brolli

    brolli OT Supporter

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    :bowdown: chechen's approval
     
  16. alkalinesolo

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    I really dislike the block of text with its own scroll bar on the 'Bio/Record' and 'News/Blog' pages.
    I'd take out the scroll bars and just make the page longer. Same with the grappling pics and personal pics in the 'Media' section.

    I like the way the links in the Top Nav change when the mouse hovers over them, but I think there's too much going on. Maybe just make the font get larger, or transition it to pink text - but it's too busy as it is.

    You probably know, but the [Reset] and [Send] buttons on the 'Contact' page don't work.

    You might also want to think about adding a footer with all the links that are available in the Top Nav.
     
  17. The Ripper

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    needs more tits and ass
     
  18. Hillary

    Hillary fukc yaeh. ew waitled long enough. nujgses of hill

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    Work in progress guys, this is not live. :) Exclusive cage crew pre-show.

    Will send this critique stuff to the designer/my friend.
     
  19. energie

    energie I like to place an order.. the name? Situation the

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    i hope to god you arent paying your friend alot of money


    i thought u made it by urself:hs:
     
  20. The Ripper

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    just say fuck it and post more tits and ass FUCK YEAH


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    thats the kind of shit that sells fuck yeah
     
  21. Hillary

    Hillary fukc yaeh. ew waitled long enough. nujgses of hill

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    It's a good site, I'd pay for it! Luckily I have nice friends. :)

    And nope, not THAT talented.
     
  22. JordanClarkson

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    i like it overall, but it feels a little left side dominant. and some directories can be viewed.
     
  23. chechen

    chechen Brazilian Jiu Jitsu OT Supporter

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    maybe less stuff with your stomach showing..
     
  24. VulgarTheClown

    VulgarTheClown A child and a gun.....go together like apple pie a

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    maybe less of you being a complete faggot.
     
  25. chechen

    chechen Brazilian Jiu Jitsu OT Supporter

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    BENJAMIN AND HILLARY

    IN A TREE

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    SSS
    IN

    :mamoru::mamoru::mamoru::mamoru::o:o:o:o:o:bigthumb::bigthumb::bigthumb:
     

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