A&P Two pretty girls for your critique

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  1. turbodude

    turbodude Just a photographer OT Supporter

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    I took these photos awhile back, and just now got to process. I know alot more now then i did back then. No flash, taken with a nifty fifty. Still want to share, backdrop is a shower curtain. we were in the bathroom. Nowadays i would have used flash and a better lens @ iso200 or so. These were taken @ iso1600

    1. Nicole
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    2. Lynn
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    3. Both
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    4. Both again
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    Let me know what you think and what i could have done differently. This was one of the first time i have dealt with taking pictures of girls. Its alot harder than i imagined, it was about 5-6 months ago. I hope to hook up with some more women to practice with my new strobes.
     
  2. joy division

    joy division New Member

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    seems to be a large difference between pretty in LV and LA
     
  3. Rich

    Rich New Member

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    They have nice eyes, but that's about it.
     
  4. turbodude

    turbodude Just a photographer OT Supporter

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    ok ok, please critique the photos, not the girls, i think they are pretty.
     
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    Really really soft light, very flat pictures...get some back light going...
     
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    turbodude Just a photographer OT Supporter

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    definately will next time thanks!
     
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    brasheye Rotary Crew

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    lynn would get it
     
  8. Hypnos_VI

    Hypnos_VI JENGA!

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    good detail in the eyes...though i would ditch the eyebrow stud next time and the phoshoshop the hole...

    eyebrow piercings = ....yea, just spread the word...take those out.
     
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    It's a little *too* apparent to me that you softened everything but the eyes...

    Maybe remove some of the softening around the jewelry or other objects that should be reflective and hard?

    I mean the eyes look great, but...
     
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    I dig the barbell
     
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    Hypnos_VI JENGA!

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    i should probably add to my comment. reason i say lose the barbell is cuz i spend most of my time at a tattoo/piercing shop...and i see a lot of different piercings...but 90% of the time when i see an eyebrow its on some ugly white trash girl/guy.

    either that or its an east coast thing?
     
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    I can't help but notice the heavy retouching on their faces, and heavy noise removal. In fact it's so strong, I can't seem to focus on anything else.
     
  13. xpinchx

    xpinchx hes got a nice cock, on the thin side but its stil

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    Were they wearing colored contacts or did you photoshop their eyes? In the first one it looks like nicole has one brown eye :)mamoru:) and one blue eye. Later they're both green. :dunno:
     
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    turbodude Just a photographer OT Supporter

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    psed the eyes a little. yeah the noise was really bad since they were iso1600. All these things i will remember next time. Thanks everyone!
     
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    I was commenting on the labret.
     
  16. GlobeGuy

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    A bright smile or two couldnt' hurt either. :big grin:
     
  17. turbodude

    turbodude Just a photographer OT Supporter

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    yeah i know, i wish i could turn back time :wtc: live and learn, thanks everyone for the comments, i have taken note to them for next time.
     
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    oh, lol...i like labrets. i have a hoop in my lip myself :hsd:
     
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    Why iso 1600
     
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    turbodude Just a photographer OT Supporter

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    not enough light in the bathroom and had to use 2.8 on the fifty to get any dof. i wanted atleast 1/60 No flash.
     

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