A&P Trying to be Zack Arias

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  1. aCab

    aCab New Member

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    It's not working out very well. My facial hair needs some work. On a side note, I am gaining some weight. :bowdown:

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    Doesnt look very sharp
    Background is wonky and uneven
    weird arm shadow
    gigantic black hole under her hair is gone
     
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    :rofl: You think there was a hole under her hair :rofl::rofl::rofl::rofl:

    :o No really, I admit it does look a bit funny with out it. I'm starting not to care too much.

    Good thing to keep in mind for next time though. :bigthumb:

    Get your mamiya yet?
     
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    yeah brah, maybe post a thread about it tonight, I've shot three rolls, but one still isn't developed
     
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    I've got 4 rolls sitting in my bag. Going to develop them this afternoon. Have to buy 6x7 negative carriers before I can make prints. :mamoru:
     
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    try harder.

    jk I really like it, I will be trying to be zack arias soon too!
     
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    A,

    at first glance I really liked it a lot, but then when I started to look at the details I noticed a lot of the same things dylan mentioned.

    main things:
    can you add some fill light and mask around the dark spot in her hair?
    her right arm looks really weird compared to everything else, can you brighten that up as well?

    you would've benefited from some light coming from the camera left to even out the background light and the shadow under her chin.

    again, i'm being picky. i really like it and I'm sure she will too :bigok:
     
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    oh god i wish i had room for an enlarger.
    i really want to do some RA-4 prints.

    i just passed up on a Bessler 23C with a color head and analyzer because i have nowhere to put it
     

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