A&P Trying some landscape-ish shots (C&C)

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  1. looslip

    looslip New Member

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    5. I think this came out unfocused cuz I used a large aperture... :wtc:
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  2. UnNakedChef

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    1 a decent start
    2 pelfed
    3-5 nice snapshots.

    and they all could use a little saturation/contrast and I'm not really digging the composure...pretty boring.
     
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    Are you saying the horizon is pelfed or the beachfront?
     
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    The horizon. Follow the water across.

    And I don't like the fact that it's centered, but not quite. I would have also either moved in closer and lower, without the signs in the way since they don't really add any aesthetics to the pic, or moved to the right/left a few feet and lower/closer and not done a symmetrical style shot.
     
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    I like these two

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    Looks like someone found Topaz :rofl:
     
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    why not topaz the other pictures too
     
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    darkjedi Muay Thai expert

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    you need some PP
     
  9. looslip

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    draigon's edits seem a bit extreme to me. I'll try adding more contrast tonight.
     
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    you dont like topaz?
     
  13. siniquezu

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    where's the lens flare girth?
     
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    this is is nice

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    On the first one, do a lab adjustment. It's far more subtle than that faggoty topaz shit, and still produces some dramatic effects.

    On the lake... either closer to get the signs out of the shot, or off center that shit. Do some more post work on it, bring up a sense of depth. It's flat.

    third... gonna have to put this one in the freezer to polish this turd. :hs:
     

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