A&P Teaser Pilot for my web series

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  1. Creator

    Creator The Creator Has a Master Plan

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    I posted a 40 second teaser trailer yesterday... here is a 2 minute teaser pilot. The story as written has evolved a lot since shooting this, so the 40 second trailer is what I'll mostly be using to try and sell it. I wanted to put this up and get thoughts though.

    http://www.earthquakela.com/pilot.html
     
  2. FlashhslaF

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    faster server..i'm on a T1 and its slow.
     
  3. Creator

    Creator The Creator Has a Master Plan

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    Hmm. Hosting on Blip which should be fast.

    And a T1 really isn't fast
     
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    hmm :dunno: i wana know why was the guy stapling the picture of a dog smiling and why did he throw those papers in the window?
     
  5. Creator

    Creator The Creator Has a Master Plan

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    :noes::noes:
    :cool:
     
  6. geekierthanyou

    geekierthanyou Crews: DSLR, Brolie, Classic Car, Gun, Zombie, Pro

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    Clearly some subplot... he was just appearing to be stapling, I doubt there were any staples in the stapler. I was waiting to do the drop of whatever was in that stack, and didn't want to arouse suspicion by just standing around and then tossing stuff into a car at random.
     
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    geekierthanyou Crews: DSLR, Brolie, Classic Car, Gun, Zombie, Pro

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    so what, earthquake hits and we either follow each of the introduced protagonists through the movie or they all meet up and form some motley crew of sorts? Kinda like 10.5 but hopefully much better.
     
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    looks good. My only suggestion would be to change the font for the little "Who will you be with..." things. It looks like Arial Black or some standard shit.

    Other than that, :bigthumb:
     
  9. planeh

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    Need better actors, other than that it wasn't half bad.
     
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    It's shot really well, the story seems good, but the acting is so flat, I'm not really drawn in.
     
  11. Creator

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    Agreed. Some of the actors I was happy with. Others I wasn't at all. You need at least an even ratio of good to not so good. But ... free actors...
     
  12. Mr. Pelham

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    you're in LA? YOu can find a shit ton of free and good actors, for free. Its LA everyone wants to work. Like the previous poster said, it was shot somewhat decenty but I think you guys just got a little lazy on the casting.
     

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