A&P Team - C&C my business card v. tear it apart

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  1. Tonster MBA

    Tonster MBA OT'r of the Year 2013 OT Supporter

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    Well I figure if I get no hate here, then the rest of society will like it.




    I need your approval OTAP! :hsd:

    /edit I wanted it to be fairly simple but still catchy...


    /after some critiques

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    hash browns lolcathlon champion OT Supporter

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    what does asu tempe, arizona have to do with your business
     
  3. Tonster MBA

    Tonster MBA OT'r of the Year 2013 OT Supporter

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    Location, I travel a lot; it just shows the most specific area to where I live . Without having to put an address. Since I photograph tournaments all over the west coast if I give out my business card in long beach, I would like it to be clear that I actually live in AZ.
     
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    pawis werd em up

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    how about the general area he happens to operate in/near? :dunno:
     
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    hash browns lolcathlon champion OT Supporter

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    ASU ?

    why not put this on your webpage
     
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    Tonster MBA OT'r of the Year 2013 OT Supporter

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    It is but It is just easier if I put my location which is ASU, since I don't have another address to put. It sets the tone people automatically know where it is; for the most part.
     
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    ace3 mouthify my wang.

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    personally, i'd leave the tempe/asu thing off of there.

    if you travel around, why does it matter where you're located?

    if someone wants you to come out & take pics at a match in NYC, just change your prices accordingly, for travel.

    :dunno:

    if i ever got business cards for my photography 'hobby', i'd put Omaha on there, in hopes that if someone from a ways away got my card & liked my stuff, wouldn't call me, 'cause i don't want to travel. :o
     
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    Hate the font, hate the color.

    Keep it the same but use blue tones instead of yellow and a font that doesn't look like shit and you'll be on to something IMO
     
  9. Tonster MBA

    Tonster MBA OT'r of the Year 2013 OT Supporter

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    Understood and noted.
     
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    Tonster MBA OT'r of the Year 2013 OT Supporter

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    1/3 isnt bad....

    what shad blue what kind of font, Ill give it a shot.
     
  11. percent

    percent deluded

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    Putting a city if fine, but putting a school is weird. It makes you sound like a student who doesn't know what the hell he is doing. Whether or not you are a student, you don't want to sound like one.

    Plus, it is super regionally biased to assume people know where ASU is or even what the letters stand for (though with the city under it, its much more obvious which ASU you mean). You can get away with it in the southwest and thats about it. They say when applying for job, never use an abbreviated college name for anybody more than a state away from the school.
     
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    at LEAST change the font :o
     
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    hash browns lolcathlon champion OT Supporter

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    the font is bad
     
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    percent deluded

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    And I wouldn't mind your name and title only in that font, but it just makes you phone number and info hard to read at the smaller sizes.
     
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    I don't have anything in particular in mind... just a more professional looking font that's easier to read. More bold.
     
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    Tonster MBA OT'r of the Year 2013 OT Supporter

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    Tonster MBA OT'r of the Year 2013 OT Supporter

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    THanks for the feedback
     
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    i dont like the colors, font, design, or most of the information you've included.

    and you need a new website address, i'd be afraid of typing in bjphotos.com and getting taken to well. yeah.... :rofl:
     
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    Seriously, try a clean, bold, blocky font for everything and change the colors to blue
     
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    Kthx bye
     
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    isaac86hatch This thread sucks

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    hash browns lolcathlon champion OT Supporter

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    what do you think that graphic is
     
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    Ok illustration, I guess, if you want to convey edgy chaos.


    Holy fucking terrible font choices, on all of them. That last one has like 4 different fonts/weights.
     

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