A&P sunset pics, please critic

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  1. 70Machwon

    70Machwon New Member

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    im expecing critisism, but please say WHY they are bad, or HOW i can improve them

    thanks

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    thanks again.
     
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    70Machwon New Member

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    im aware its cliche, but i was stressed and taking pictures at sunset helped clear my mind.
     
  3. not bad but kinda boring to me
     
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    limiteD* 今あいたい すぐあいたい

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    First pic, I think there's too much open space on the left. Second pic, horizon isn't flat so it's kind of distracting. Third pic, same as second pic and a bit blurry. Fourth pic is good. Last pic is a bit blurry, seems like zoom quality.
     
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    I like the first one, especially if the sun were just a tad further to the left. The next two as Mid mentioned are a bit crooked, but I still like the colors captured in the 2nd one. 4th is nice, and the 5th is too blurry. You asked for it, but I do like them :) Oh and I'm a photo noob so take it with a grain of salt.
     
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    The first one looks better like this.....

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    cropping > *
     
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    yep
     
  9. 70Machwon

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    thanks, that exactly what i wanted.

    and that crop does look good.
     
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    Oversaturated and overexposed.
     
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    With the crop it looks good. Steady hand possibly a tripod :)
     
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    negative space is good
     

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