A&P some of my shots.

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  1. tasteful_

    tasteful_ New Member

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    Out of focus. :hs:
     
  3. Pineapple Devil

    Pineapple Devil beat it!

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    1. needs side lighting. your straight on flash leaves a rear shadow
    2. they are out of focus
    3. dont know if i'd stay with that dark background since their hair is that dark
     
  4. tasteful_

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    thanks. at least i can get some real feedback.
    I'll be snapping away again.
    BBL.
     
  5. presidente

    presidente New Member

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    very bad lighting
     
  6. Mr_Penut

    Mr_Penut Elitist Member OT Supporter

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    work on lighting
     
  7. SpiderOnTheFloor

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    what are you using for light? is it just the onboard flash?
     
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    that was my first guess
     
  9. tasteful_

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    No I use the 580ex....
    and YEAHHHH, I don't know how or what settings. pathetic I know!
     
  10. SpiderOnTheFloor

    SpiderOnTheFloor New Member

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    more money than skills eh? seriously though, don't just aim that flash directly at the model, bounce it off something or use a diffuser
     
  11. Hua

    Hua AZN photographer crew

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    You need to setup a flash unit to bang behind her to get the halo effect around her head. You have to be a genious to photograph a girl with black hair on a black background with improper lighting.
     
  12. eWRXshun

    eWRXshun hai

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    untasteful.
     
  13. CRC

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    Lighting issues much?
     
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    widebaudi New Member

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    less makeup more naked.
     
  15. tenplanescrashing

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    also, depth of field FTW.
     
  16. sex_xer

    sex_xer fuck you 2by2!

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    harsh light and harsh shadow
     
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    your lighting and model are ftl
     
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    :werd: kind of looks like a scary dude. You should put zombie makeup on her and take shots outside of your "studio" or wherever that was taken.
     
  19. Mr_Penut

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    would be nice if the lighting was better
     
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    Move away from the background. :werd:
     

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