A&P some of my recent pics for cc

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  1. Venthor

    Venthor OT Supporter

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    havent been shooting for quite a while so i was waiting to accumulate a few shots that i liked. what do you guys say?

    1. at the airport
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    2. gf practicing for upcoming concert
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    3. after her play. should have removed the stray hair
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    4. my eyes are smaaallll
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    5. playing with my new cactus v4 triggers
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    6. another test shoot
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    7. emo fag
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    8. gay butterfly
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    :x:
     
  2. Drunken Karnie Midget

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    #5 blown, and flat. the additional flash on your background was overdone, resulting in a distracting highlight.

    I like the flutterby, but it is just another bug shot.

    #7 is good.

    composition on the piano is a bit... well dull.

    #3. should have composed her a little more to the left of your frame as well, other than that i like her "pose" (not sure if this was a posed shot, or if you just caught her in action,) and the sense of emotion that she exudes.

    #1 is kinda random and awkward for the setting... what the fuck is so damn interesting about the drop-ceiling of an airport?
     
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    1 good. maybe pull out a bit
    2 dark. and comp
    3 nice shot. nitpicks, bkg could be smoother, lighting. not bad though.
    4, 5 yeah good
    6 not bad. its off camera lighting, but not quite beautiful portrait lighting. keep shooting.
    7,8 yeah nice
     
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    likin 7
     
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    I hope you're on top when you two are intimate. :ugh:
     
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    But seriously...I like the shots, especially emofag. :cool:
     
  7. Venthor

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    thanks for your input! i agree on all your points


    thanks! any tips on how to do nice portrait lighting using one light (referring to 6)? i used an umbrella for main to camera right and reflector for fill on camera left. i guess the pic doesnt pop as much and is kinda flat..

    thanks :x:
     
  8. Venthor

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    i guess i failed with the description :noes:


    :wavey: thanks :mamoru:
     
  9. Wobistdu

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    7 and 8 look like they were shot by a good photographer

    the others not so much
     
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    I also like 7

    is there any color in it or is it completely a black and white? I ask cause I see like a greenish yellow tinge and I am suspect of it being my monitor
     
  11. Venthor

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    :squint: what should i improve?

    your monitor is ok, i put some green tint in it :mamoru:
     
  12. Wobistdu

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    don't ask me i suck, but it appears like 2 diff people
     
  13. someonenew

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    didsomeoneblink.jpg

    :mamoru:
     
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  15. Venthor

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    :squint:
    :squint::squint::squint::o
     
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    4. are you yardsale's brother?
    5. & 7. I like them.
    3. & 6. They look soft maybe b/c the dof is too shallow? i would have looked nicer if all of their faces were in focus.
     
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    I like em..
     

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