So I'm laying in bed last night...

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  1. SovietRussia

    SovietRussia What? You pooped in the refrigerator? OT Supporter

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    and my mind starts wandering, so i put the thoughts down, kinda into words kinda into a 'poem' but it doesnt really rhyme. wanna hear?

    A thousand words couldn’t paint a picture
    To capture your unmatched beauty.
    As I lay here writing this out by candlelight
    My mind is bombarded with thoughts of you
    Thoughts of a past, that was filled with so much confusion
    Did it ever become reality?
    A present, while still full of hope,
    Is starting to see, but still reject the ideas that send tremors through my tender heart.
    A future, while for the most part dim,
    At times my heart finds a glimmer of hope to hold onto
    With unimaginable strength, fights off the darkness that is ever closing in.
    Until my heart can no longer withstand, and the hope is overcome.

    thoughts?
     
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    notsousual New Member

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    Nice...but you can't really judge a poem. It's only really supposed to mean something to the one who wrote it (or so is the case in my poems, heh).

    Curious...this about threesome girl/FB?
     
  3. SovietRussia

    SovietRussia What? You pooped in the refrigerator? OT Supporter

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    yeah. :o

    you guys in the vag/assylum have good memories. sometimes almost too good.
     
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    notsousual New Member

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    I would have remembered your posts in the main forum too, had I run across any (I haven't). I remember people by their AV's mostly, first glance. You have a very impressionable one.
     
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    scent of a wookie OT Supporter

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    a romantic poem seems fitting :hsugh:
     
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    MrInconsistant New Member

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    great contribution

    gb2/offtopic
     
  8. SovietRussia

    SovietRussia What? You pooped in the refrigerator? OT Supporter

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    i dont really need to know whether or not to give it to her, but is it good or not?
     
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    If she's your girlfriend then give it to her... if it's still early in the game then keep it to yourself until you guys are serious, then you can tell her that you wrote it a while back and she'll appreciate it.
     
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    I agree on only giving it to her if you're serious, I think it's very good, though
     
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    what the fcuk is up with your avatar i couldn't even finish reading th epost
     
  12. Miss Red

    Miss Red New Member

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    Mine???? It's from Gone With the Wind
     
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    naw, i know yours cause rhett butler is the man. I meant the OP
     

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