short film i made, your thoughts

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  1. SaturnsAreTehGhey

    SaturnsAreTehGhey New Member

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    You do a great job promoting your youtube vids. Man you have a lot of hits.
     
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    I'm not going to lie; this wasn't good. But I'm not here to tear anyone down. If you're serious about wanting to make short films, I suggest you focus on improving with each film you make. The first step is to use multiple camera angles. Focus on that for now.

    You are obviously young and have limited resources, so I give you respect for making the attempt. Keep at it and you'll be suprised how much you can improve.
     
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    OzzieChan Boom Bap

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    fucking awesome
     
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    Well, it's awful. You appear to have no idea of any of the basics of filmmaking, and it appears to be little more than a kid with a camera recording his friends playing pretend in a backyard. I half expected it to cut away unintentionally to a wobbly close-up of the family dog farting or something.

    Still, the only way to get good is to keep making movies, so yeah, just keep trying.
     
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    Gubly Avert your eyes OT Supporter

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    jamesthegreat Dont be Jealous

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    im gunna say no to this....

    bad song choice
    bad acting
    bad idea
    bad camera

    ok camera effects ie...black and white
     
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    epic. best movie i've ever seen.
     

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