A&P Porchsew/ new lighting sneakage ...

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  1. Devin

    Devin New Member

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    So .. I actually more than 30 minutes with this car . Compared to the 10 I had with the S15 :p ... Anyways heres one shot . Thanks for checking it out .

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    Derrict No, I am not Amish OT Supporter

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    looks good, though the tree in the background ruins the shot for me.
     
  3. Devin

    Devin New Member

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    Really ? I kinda thought the tree added some depth into the shot ? I dunno .. I liked it . Thanks though .
     
  4. Gromer

    Gromer Strange things are afoot at the Circle-K!

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    Damn power lines.
     
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    The hood of the car looks just a little dull to me. I just feel like too much of the light is comming from camera left.
     
  6. Bloody Sunday

    Bloody Sunday OT Supporter

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    although, it's much better than I can do, it still needs work as others have mentioned.

    i still love all your shots, though :love:
     
  7. Airpoppoff

    Airpoppoff Vodka > Racing F1

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    i like the shot, and the framing, but i feel like the PP just makes the car look like it was ploped in there out of nowhere. looks kinda soft to me too ?
     
  9. isaac86hatch

    isaac86hatch This thread sucks

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  10. vwpilot

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    Not enough separation between the tires and ground. It almost looks like the car is floating and not really sitting there. Like eryk said, it looks like it was added to the photo in post.

    A little more lighting on the lower half of the car and the pavement would have placed the car into the scene a bit better.
     
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    Tedrzz New Member

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    honestly man i think your work is great and i'm no where near as good as you..the same goes for the other 98 percent of the people in this thread...

    BUT.

    i think you're so focused on technical details like lighting and stuff, that you're starting to get lazy with your composition. keep that in mind!
     
  12. mobbarley

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    looks like godzilla porsche. its half the size of a tree :eek:
     

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