SRS Poem

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  1. Clix

    Clix New Member

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    Wrote a poem the other day, for no reason. Showed it to some friends and they all said it was pretty good. Ive been sharing alot here in the last month so I figured id see what yall thought.



    Bad Guy

    Am I the bad guy?
    Is it me that makes people cry
    Or am I just who everyone thinks
    a man that is angry and makes you cry
    People judge to much
    they judge people by their past
    even when the name of God comes up
    they cannot get over what has happened
    and cant see what could become
    the sun rises and falls but once a day
    I rise and fall many more times
    Its hard for me not to be angry
    when everyone thinks you are shit
    its hard not to press on
    When everyone thinks you cant
    I am stronger than any of you
    Noone can match my strenght
    my resolve will carry me though
    even though the darkess I call friends
    If I could hear your voice once more
    or write you a letter with feeling
    All of this might go away
    becuase maybe people will see the real me.
    Why do people tell me thing about you
    that just make me jealous?
    are they trying to antagonize me?
    noone understands my suffering
    noone except you and God
    You have known me though thick and thin
    you have been there for me thought it all
    you know my breaking points
    and noone except God knows that
    I dont listen to anyone except you
    I reach into my memory to hear your voice
    I reach into my memory to hear your heart beat
    I am alone in my struggle, but i am not detered
    my heart aches when I see your name
    it stands out to weary eyes
    When my heart dies then I will no longer care
    but until that day, I love you even more I swear!

    - Clix

    Feel free to comment if you want. Just something I wrote, didnt really go though it, I just feel its better to keep it raw then go though and change things.
     
  2. PoliticalPirate

    PoliticalPirate New Member

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    Angsty much? I like limericks.
     
  3. Clix

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    angsty?
     

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