Poem for her....

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  1. Taconinja05

    Taconinja05 New Member

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    "luv U and I hate U
    but u will never know....

    ur amazing, beautiful, fun, and that gurl for me,
    but u will never know....

    my heart yurns for u and wants u near,
    but my brain says no....

    why does this have to be...
    why can't there be a place for u and me...

    I luv the way u smile at me, i luv ur gorgeous eye's and ur hair.
    With me u'll never be alone or scared cause i'll always be there.
    Luv sucks, but i have fallen for u, can't u see?...

    I must be fucking crazy because u don't want me...."
     
  2. Repost

    Repost PENCIL DICK

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    Please, please, PLEASE don't send that to her.

    She will laugh, I'm sorry, but she will.
     
  3. Two toys

    Two toys New Member

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    what a joke.


    EDIT: unless she's into poor spelling, and 4th grade writing skills
     
  4. dfekt

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    omg that is such a 1337 poem, send it to her for sure, she'll melt
     
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  6. purplebeast

    purplebeast The depths of hell and endless torture await all h

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    You probably have a better shot if you send her a note with the whole "Roses are red..................."
     
  7. Original

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    Need more imagery, and doesn't neccessarily have to rhyme.

    :hsugh:
     
  8. themacstallion

    themacstallion The electric sheep are dreaming up your fate

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    purplebeast The depths of hell and endless torture await all h

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    Just wanted to let you know that my Co-worker read it. She liked it very much. She said it was not very well written but that it was sweet because you expressed your true feelings to whoever you wrote it for.
     
  10. Taconinja05

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    thanks
     
  11. themacstallion

    themacstallion The electric sheep are dreaming up your fate

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    don't get your hopes up, the rest of the world will hate it.
     
  12. purplebeast

    purplebeast The depths of hell and endless torture await all h

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    Well given the fact that all the opinions here are from guys and my co-worker is a girl. I would say his crappy poem has a good shot.
     
  13. Carpet Liquor

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    That "poem" has "I'm desperate" written all over it. The kinda of despiration that only obsessive men have. :ugh:
     
  14. purplebeast

    purplebeast The depths of hell and endless torture await all h

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    Hey, Im not arguing that. I didnt like the poem. My female co-worker is the one that gave it a great review.
     
  15. JordanClarkson

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    start an emo band :hsughr:
     
  16. PuppyCat

    PuppyCat O.T. Mom

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    Awwww...c'mon peeps, give the guy a wee bit of credit for trying...the sentiment is cute, the spelling is atrocious, but, a poem is a poem is a poem...and love makes one do silly things...
     
  17. RedVsBlue

    RedVsBlue Penguins > *

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    :rofl:


    Yea, unless the girl is already in love with you, or unless she feels sorry for you, she most likely will laugh her ass off. If she feels sorry for you, she will just wait till you are gone to laugh her ass off.
     
  18. AstroGirl

    AstroGirl If I don't respond it's because I have severe ADD

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    Aww, I thought it was cute. But I would have to agree with Red v. Blue, unless she already had deep seeded emotions for you she will probably laugh about it.
     
  19. wilyfem

    wilyfem Guest

    you must get alot of enchilada, Taquito.


    :rofl:
     

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