A&P Picture of my God daughter C&C

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  1. Girth

    Girth ¯\_(ツ)_/¯ OT Supporter

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    Took it on monday while I she was playing around on the swing set in the backyard.

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  2. xenon supra

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    I like it, the top left part distracts me though.
     
  3. Girth

    Girth ¯\_(ツ)_/¯ OT Supporter

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    better?

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    kristin my dog > *

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    MUCH better. I like it :)
     
  6. Girth

    Girth ¯\_(ツ)_/¯ OT Supporter

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  7. DRAIGON

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    I think you could use more black in the shadows. IMO
     
  8. Girth

    Girth ¯\_(ツ)_/¯ OT Supporter

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    :dunno:

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    kenmei squatty potty OT Supporter

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    that one looks a lot better :bigthumb:
     
  10. Girth

    Girth ¯\_(ツ)_/¯ OT Supporter

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    looking at the first two... I'm starting to think so too. :cool:
     
  11. kristin

    kristin my dog > *

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    Yep. Agreed.
     
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    With the corner triangle gone, her eyes grab my attention right away, beautifully done.
     
  13. Asherman

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    You might try cropping a little more from the left side. That would bring the eyes away from the center of the picture. Asymmetry is less static and adds interest. It would also reduce the number of diagonal and parallel lines that have tend to grab the viewer's eye.
     
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    Love it, especially with the crop.
     
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    the crop and added contrast help a lot.
    nice shot
     
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    Killyin Vicariously I, live while the whole world dies.

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    Her face is a little dark on the right side. Maybe some fill flash/PS work to lighten it up? Have you tried sharpening using LAB colour and the lightness channel?

    Other than that it looks pretty cool. :bigthumb:
     
  18. xenon supra

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    aww vignette awww
     
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    it's fitting for the pic :o
     
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    vignette is one of my favorite PP tools, i'm just fucking with you :h5:
     
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    Insert Tokens Making Cancer My Bitch OT Supporter

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    Loving the edited versions :)
     

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