A&P ot photogs: critique this picture please

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  1. 3x

    3x New Member

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    i'm not much of a photographer but i thought this shot was nice...usually i just take pictures as a hobby. let me know what you think of the composition and such. i know the flowers are cliche...haha

    edit: oh yeah, no post production done.

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    exif data:
    • File size: 378286 bytes
    • File date: 2007:05:24 23:27:45
    • Camera make: NIKON CORPORATION
    • Camera model: NIKON D100
    • Date/Time: 2007:03:17 15:31:13
    • Resolution: 800 x 532
    • Flash used: No
    • Focal length: 28.0mm (35mm equivalent: 42mm)
    • Exposure time: 0.0016 s (1/640)
    • Aperture: f/4.0
    • Whitebalance: Manual
    • Light Source: Fine weather
    • Metering Mode: center weight
    • Exposure: Manual
    • Exposure Mode: Auto bracketing
     
  2. joy division

    joy division New Member

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    [fancy indented dot] terrible
     
  3. mobbarley

    mobbarley Active Member

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    do you understand any of that jargon anyways
     
  4. Dan-blackline

    Dan-blackline Registered Sex Offender

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    I really hate photos with loads of out of focus stuff in the foreground, waaay too distracting.
     
  5. xpinchx

    xpinchx hes got a nice cock, on the thin side but its stil

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    There really isn't much going on for the composition. There isn't much detail in the flowers and all the blurry shit in the foreground is way distracting.
     
  6. Hypnos_VI

    Hypnos_VI JENGA!

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    i cant seem to take my eyes off the blurry smudge looking whatever it is that is just left of center.

    lacks detail...boring.
     
  7. eof

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    I wouldn't admit to taking this picture....little lone ask people to review it. What is wrong with you?
     
  8. xpinchx

    xpinchx hes got a nice cock, on the thin side but its stil

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    Looks like you just figured out how to create a narrow depth of field and you're just throwing blurry shit in the foreground because you can. :dunno:
     
  9. Jonny Chimpo

    Jonny Chimpo OT Supporter

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    boring composition, no real subject to speak of, wierd smudge thing in the upper left half (wtf?).

    that photo makes me want to set my computer on fire.
     
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    GregFarz78 New Member

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    the blurry blown out stuff in the upper left is distracting
     
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    Hypnos_VI JENGA!

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    can anyone figure out what the fuck that blurry-ness-thing-whatever-the-fuck-it-is....is?!

    ...im stumped

    edit: spider web maybe?
     
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    isaac86hatch This thread sucks

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    Joetabasco The Wing King

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    Fixed!:bigthumb:
     
  14. eof

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    Still boring
     
  15. CombatWombat

    CombatWombat oh shit, zombies bro

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    What's the subject?

    Sorry, I don't like that photo, too little subject, dull colours, not very sharp and it's really boring.
     
  16. GregFarz78

    GregFarz78 New Member

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    still don't like the DOF
     
  17. Hypnos_VI

    Hypnos_VI JENGA!

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    the tiny bit that is in focuz is hidden by a fuzzy branch. still needs more detail...trash the shot and try again.
     
  18. MonkMonk

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    just a boring photo, not too much else
     
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    zzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzz....
    ohh...what was the question?
     
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    El Chupacabras Blue and Gold Member

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    Hypnos_VI JENGA!

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    rofl moar lense flair!!!
     
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    isaac86hatch This thread sucks

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    zing!
     
  23. xpinchx

    xpinchx hes got a nice cock, on the thin side but its stil

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