A&P OT:AP Critique This / Flame Suit On

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  1. s0ber

    s0ber New Member

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    Yes, I know most of you can be dicks, but its the OT nature in all of us, I'm here, ready for an ass raping.. :naughty: I have a few different versions of this picture that I can't decide on, help me out fellow OT:AP'ers..

    First of the Original / Untouched other than Resize....
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    Next / Edited Ver 1
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    Also / 2nd Edited Ver
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    I know the background is shotty but it was just messing around shots in front of the house... :noes:

    andddd GO! :ugh:
     
  2. Jonny Chimpo

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    yup, that's a picture.
     
  3. assuming the first pic is a full frame shot.. Can you see anything that could be done differently? :dunno:

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    Seems to be alot of wasted space above her head, but towards the bottom her arms and hands are cut out of the frame :o

    It's ok though, alot of people just starting out with portraits do this :hug:
     
  4. s0ber

    s0ber New Member

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    Get more specific you assmonkey, give me some details, mspaint me something, call me names, do something productive!@#)(!@#

    :fawk:
     
  5. s0ber

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    I was sooo waiting for you to post in here.. :wavey:

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    what about the cropped versions??
     
  6. Jonny Chimpo

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  7. :o Good thing or bad?

    I do like the edited versions better :bigthumb:
     
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    last version. less background, less gut. simple.
     
  9. s0ber

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    Here's just another one from that day... I really need to goto south beach :eek3:

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    Pictures way to busy, stupid corolla..
     
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    Good... or bad... Depends.. :eek4:
     
  11. IntheWorks

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    that 1st set of pics is not flattering to her body She's not very gifted in the umm... top half.... and your pics make her look even more flat, and very wide in the stomach. She's positioned much better in the 2nd pic... can you tell the difference in her apperance between the two?
     
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    i am by no means a pro, but the edited versions look really cartoonish.
     
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    Excellent observation, you're right, head on it makes her look completely flat...

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    rly?? All I did to those was crop in, adjust the levels, some clone stamping on some little pimples and marks she had and sharpened some areas.. oh I brought out the eyes a little...

    Thats about it.. :dunno:
     
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    could you possibly find a less intresting background?
     
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    already mentioned that, got anything else for me?
     
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    :booty:
     
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  19. :rofl:
     
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    man , he must have got a lot of replies ... his inbox is stuffed !
     
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    well its the eyes and the shadows on the shirt. it could just be my monitor, but it just doesnt look real. It looks like its over processed.
     
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    what? :noes:

    Inbox contains 115 messages.
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    ooo werd.. she has really nice eyes.. let me find a pic

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    They came out kind of dark in my pic so I just lightened them so they would stand out a little more..
     
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    yeah she does. shes pretty good lookin to.
     
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    seems like wasted space above her head. get a closer in crop next time of the face if you're trying to do a headshot.

    3rd pic (the 2nd edited version) her face is too white looking.. so pale. looks like you dodged it or did something with shadows/highlights.

    not bad though.. but i'd suggest framing it different like i said.. and also for the lighting.. try using a reflector and/or fill flash to show off her eyes and to get rid of the shadows in her face
     

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