A&P My Brother's Wedding

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  1. JDizzy92

    JDizzy92 New Member

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    My brother had me as his main photographer for his small wedding. Here are some of my favorites that I took.

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  2. Wobistdu

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    i'm a noob to dslr, and i obviously never shot weddings so take anything i say as you want.

    here is what i think

    overall the pics are very nice. i'm sure they will be happy with them. did you do them as a gift?

    1) maybe slightly more lighting on the faces
    2) maybe slightly less lighting on the faces
    (minor gripes for 1 and 2)
    3) love this pic. maybe play with the tone curve in LR to really add sharp contrast. probably won't help it though. good pic
    4) 1 stop down of aperture would have made a world's diff. whole necklace in focus. also you might want to photoshop out the red mark on her neck
    5) like it a lot
    6) like it a lot
    7) good natural reactions, although bride might not like how she looks
    8) like it
    9) perhaps crop it from the right so the bride doesn't look 3ft wide. that pic makes the bride and groom look equally masculine
    10) good but slightly OOF i think
    11) very nice
    12) only bitching anyone could do is maybe the shadow
    13) like it a lot.


    let me know what you think about my critique. trying to get an eye for this stuff. if you think i'm full of shit let me know.
     
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    3,4,5,6,8,10,11,12,13 are really nice.
     
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    #5 looks like a dead foot. Might be the laptop I'm on right now, but the toe looks real blue, might try to warm it up a little, without changing the processing too much.
     
  5. TheManLouisianaFace

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    Focus point being off-center on 4 and/or too shallow dof kind of bothers me, other than that, clean pics.

    6 is the strongest imo. Good exposure, focus, and comp.

    Watch that on camera flash.
     
  6. percent

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    I was the best man at my brother wedding. I would told him to go fuck himself if he asked me to take pictures :rofl:
     
  7. JDizzy92

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    Thanks for the C&C. I need some before I make a photobook and give it to them as a gift for Christmas. #1 I can't make it brighter or it will be over expose. I brought down the exposure a lot, same with #2. Actually that left eye on my brother is photoshop. lol. His left eye was actually half close. For the comment on #7... I'm a photographer, not a plastic surgeon. :dunno:

    Doesn't look blue here, just desaturated.

    My brother and I hated each other guts until I moved out from my parent's house. Now we don't hate each other guts.
     
  8. Wobistdu

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    :rofl: no dude for #7 i meant how she "looks" as in the stupid face she's making. looks like she's about to say FUUUUUUUUUUUUUUCK
     
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    i lol'ed. :rofl:
     
  10. JDizzy92

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    Oh. :rofl: I didn't notice it before, but ya it does look like she doing the "FFFF". Oh well, that's the only picture of them together.
     
  11. Wobistdu

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    :rofl: omfg at plastic surgery burn.

    no worries man if she has a good sense of humor she wont care anyway. everyone looks silly
     
  12. JDizzy92

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    I'm looking at #5 closer and I can see how it can look dead because the second two from the big is really dark. I will brighten up that toe a bit.
     
  13. JDizzy92

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    I hope so. I don't really know who she is other than she is Mexican/Porchegese and my sister in-law now.
     
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    Troll?

    Link to original?
     
  15. JDizzy92

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    Huh? Are you asking me to link you the RAW .jpg of the pictures I took?
     
  16. Wobistdu

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    he's just being an asshole
     
  17. JDizzy92

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    What ever. :rolleyes:
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