A&P my attempt at nature

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  1. The_Eagle_Has_Landed

    The_Eagle_Has_Landed New Member

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    this one ist realy nature but

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  2. Section8

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    1 seems a bit OOF :dunno:
    2 is good, but maybe a tighter crop on the squirrel?

    i like the sailboat picture the best :hs:
     
  3. tetsuo

    tetsuo And shepherds we shall be...

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    agreed, 1 seems oof
    2 is pretty good
    the sailboat one is good, but i think if you had put the sailboat and mast closer to the left side of the frame and more wide open space (ie follow the rule of thirds) it would really help
    4 is a bit dark, the lighting wasn't the greatest.
     
  4. FlashhslaF

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    sail boat ftw, i'd go back and try to get the chairs in the frame as well and take about 10 steps to the right in parallel to the dock.
     
  5. Keiphus

    Keiphus my dog eats bears

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    sailboat is nice, need more dock though
     
  6. nindia

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    i was gonna say this
     
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    i like this part of #3
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    I like sailboatd vs powerboat contrast!
     
  9. Drunken Karnie Midget

    Drunken Karnie Midget In Yeo We Trust, All Others Pay Cash OT Supporter

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    1 oof
    2 i like it, nothing negative to say.
    3 reframe. you've got 2 shots in one here, and both would work well by themselves.
    4 slightly oof, and light, but that's not your fault. retouch in post maybe?
     

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