A&P More shots w/ my EF 50mm... critique?

Discussion in 'Lifestyle' started by coughlin's law, Sep 11, 2007.

  1. I feel like I'm missing something in these shots :dunno:

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  2. Jonny Chimpo

    Jonny Chimpo OT Supporter

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    yup. pictures.
     
  3. More critique... they may be a little shakey, but i take full responsibility... I could have focused the 2nd picture better, i should use my tripod more
     
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    KungFool7 keep driving—it's getting earlier

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    mission accomplished.
     
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    They appear to be sharp and properly exposed pictures. :dunno:
     
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    Hypnos_VI JENGA!

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  7. insight? :dunno:
     
  8. Jhegro

    Jhegro wtf is a jhegro?

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    the only picture i could call a cool one is the first. 2nd and 3rd look like snapshots
     
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    turbodude Just a photographer OT Supporter

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    What are you trying to show us? 1st shot has no real subject, keeps me looking for something that isnt there. My eyes follow the pillars to nothing...

    the 2nd shot it has too much distraction with the out of focus flower.

    3rd shot meh boring.
     
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    The sunflower isn't even position anywhere worthwhile. Part of its leaves (is that the proper term?) are even cut off.
     
  12. Devin

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    1 has some pretty bad noise .

    2 you should've focused on the flower in the foreground and forgot about those in the bg.

    3 is fine I guess . Just lacking some comp and lighting
     
  13. A few from last night;

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    Too much exposure on the first pic?
     
  14. Devin

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    1 is fine ..Just knock out that damn tree :) . it has a ton of potential as far as editing goes .
     
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    Gromer Strange things are afoot at the Circle-K!

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    agree, like the first one once you knock out most of the top
     

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