WEB looking for som unbiased feedback

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  1. bawlinmo

    bawlinmo Neighborhood Graphic Designer

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    www.zencollegelife.com

    my own personal blog. I just started it. I'm still learning how to use google adsense, but other than that everything is in decent shape. Let me know where I can improve, or what you like and don't like about it.
     
  2. maxxpower

    maxxpower OG Lauren Crew - Observer OT Supporter

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    you can be a bit more aggressive with the theme.
     
  3. 2ofdem

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    Bit bland but not too bad the pictures are a bit big imho they take up too much page real estate. Maybe work a few more keywords into the first paragraph and titles of articles but all in all good stuff.
     
  4. Necromancer

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    +1

    And design a nice looking header.

    :o
     
  5. kennyq3a

    kennyq3a New Member

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    I think you should try a new banner of some sort.
     
  6. MaK10

    MaK10 OT Supporter

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    switch up the theme, it looks to similar to the default wordpress theme. Ther are tons of free themes out there, i'm sure you can find one you like that then modify it to what you need.
     
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    airbball23 Rent this Space only $5/mnth

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    too much green. are you getting ready for st. patty's day?
     
  8. Necromancer

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    He must have just changed it.
     
  9. MaK10

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    yeah its different now than it was before... and yes, too much neon green. The theme isn't horrible, just change those colors.
     
  10. whomadewho

    whomadewho Ohhh FCN Ohhhhh FCN!

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    tone down the neon. i actually had to squint my eyes
     
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    my god I think my brain just exploded...

    those colors are painful...
     
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    Try to reduce all of the unneeded plugins like highest rated, ect. Just pick the ones that you feel are the most needed.
     
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    i dont like the colors
     
  14. bawlinmo

    bawlinmo Neighborhood Graphic Designer

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    thanks guys. I probably did go a little overboard with the neon green... its my favorite color. But I can see how it isn't so easy on the eyes. I'm going to work on cutting the unnecessary plugins. And Ill create a heading banner instead of boring old text.

    I appreciate the constructive criticism. I'll work on what you guys pointed out tonight.
     
  15. maxxpower

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    LOL, your fucking site went from conservative blue to OMFG in your face green.
     
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    hurleyint1386 Someone has sand in their vagina

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    Wow that's bright. Maybe make it a bit more subtle, and the search field doesn't look properly positioned to me.
     
  18. bawlinmo

    bawlinmo Neighborhood Graphic Designer

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    ok, I've done some editing. Still deciding on color scheme, so other than that, what other criticisms do you have?
     
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    Change the theme stat. I couldn't even look at the rest of the site.
     
  20. BassAmbassador

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    Change the theme ASAP.. it hurts to view your site.. also.. get some SEO shit done!
     
  21. i would tone down the saturation on that green if that's the hue you want. also the typography is an issue for me.

    some other small things is i'd justify the text content and align the images to the left. but the images are good. keeps those entries interesting
     

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