A&P Just finsihed another shoot

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  1. NOR*CAL

    NOR*CAL OT Supporter

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    I kinda edited this post backwards. new stuff on top, old on bottom.

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    What does OTAP think of the edit? How can I make it better?

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    ok, pink is no good

    here's another
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    I think I'm getting better :hs:
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    Man, I'm freaking POOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOPED!!!

    Lr adjustments include:
    wb/contrast/sat/black adjustment
    I actually went in and removed the clothes hanger thing girls have, other than that, didn't really do much to them.

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    It was her first time.

    Working with first timer 'models' is pretty freakin difficult at times. They're as stiff as starch, and it's quite overwhelming for them to 'pose'.

    A can of Redbull later, she was doing great!

    Minor stuff still need to be edited, but just wanted to share :)
     
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  2. turbodude

    turbodude Just a photographer OT Supporter

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    tell them its ok for them to look at the camera once in awhile. Also on the last one, watch the way the shadows fall on the face. makes her look like she has a growth, i would def clone that out.

    When working with first timers, i would tell them ahead of time to practice in front of a mirror, and also have them look at different magazines for poses, you should be doing that as well.
     
  3. derekOT

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    nice shots, these are one million times better than anything I can do but here are my observations:

    looks alittle underexposed on my uncalibrated monitor?

    the loose hair on the top of her head is a bit distracting

    I don't like the shadow on her face on the last image (on the left side of her face)
     
  4. NOR*CAL

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    Thanks Al!

    The mirror/magizine thing does help a lot. I've been doing/suggesting that more and more lately.


    They do seem a bit under, but that's what the owner of the clothing e-business I shoot for, wanted. The hair, and all the little other details will get touched up when I get a chance. I just wanted to quickly share the photoshoot with OTAP.
     
  5. NOR*CAL

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    I'm a little confused as to what exactly you're showing, but the the second series of photos with the lighter gray BG are way better than the pink and other top ones. :) I like em.
     
  7. NOR*CAL

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    I've been helping my friend building her e-store(women's clothing), seems like it's just starting to take off.

    The top pics, are me messing around with the BG color.

    I'm on a netbook, so it's kinda hard to see what I've uploaded so far.
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    Thanks for posting.
     
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    nice shots. that ur wife? cause i wouldn't mind if she was mine!
     
  9. NOR*CAL

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    :rofl:


    If she were my wife... we'd probably have 6 kids right now :noes:
     

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