A&P i think i got a good one...

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  1. Drunken Karnie Midget

    Drunken Karnie Midget In Yeo We Trust, All Others Pay Cash OT Supporter

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    see see see C&C

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    And one i'm not too fond of, but has potential... how would OTAP improve this one?
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    reminds me of my irish neighbor: Snappy McShotterson
     
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    the penis building!

    i dunno if its just me but 1 seems a bit off horizon wise, and might look cooler if it was busier traffic wise for more trails?

    on 2, bottom 3rd is kinda ugly for whats going on with the bridge, cant really tell, but maybe move to the right more and get less trees and more river?
     
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    ah, reason i say horizon seems off, is that "the" building seems to be pointing slighting to the right(i didnt load into lightroom or anything to see if the grid lines up, but just what my eye is telling me)
     
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    The first, or the second?
     
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    ...i think it is... it was slightly to the left, and it seems that i may have over-corrected just a touch :uh:
     
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    pfft thats not a penis tower, this is a penis tower

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    I'd try retaking the second one closer to the water (past the trees). I agree with pawis that the bottom third is ugly and takes away from the shot. It's the first thing I see, instead of the bridge.
     
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    I'm not sure i'll be able to get any closer. the terrain down there has changed a lot since the last time i was down there, and didn't really seem all that hospitable. :sad2:
     
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    I agree with the others on the second one, but I think it would be nicer if it were taken from 20-30 feet higher at about the same position or back further to get higher then zoomed in for framing.

    The first one is really cool. Nice job on balancing the highlights and shadows. Not sure what I'd do to make it pop that much more though.
     
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    I might be able to get more height, but i'm not certain. i might be able to find a slightly different location to get the trees out of the way as well.
    Thanks.
     

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