A&P I suck at shooting people =|

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  1. Devin

    Devin New Member

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    but, oh well. First attempt with some new lighthing.

    Carry on. = ]

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    meh..

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    Going for the trashy/skank look. shit sucks. :hsd:
     
  2. siniquezu

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    where are the nudes? :mad:
     
  3. Datass

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    i think your lighting looks fine but the concept falls short. model looks posed/trying too hard. i think it's b/c she's looking at the camera. if she's smoking and drinking and reveling in her own filth, as suggested by the set, she shouldn't be so camera-aware.

    pic 2 is the best, pic 3 is the worst.
     
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    A few things...

    I dont really get the concept.
    Light is a little hot in some places.
    Distracting things in background like the spigot.
    Is that smoke fake? The cigarette doesnt even look lit. If it is lit, at least let it burn down some.

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    She looks unreal...
     
  6. Girth

    Girth ¯\_(ツ)_/¯ OT Supporter

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    second one is skanky. :naughty:
     
  7. Tedrzz

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    Word, word, and word. (I think I actually agree with you for once:rofl:)

    Oh and also, if she is going to have a can in her hand, make sure it's opened. Looks kinda silly for it to be unopened. Also, get rid of that garbage can!
     
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    The lighting is too hot for sure..

    But she looks fun... :naughty:
     
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    i like it, the bathroom isn't dirty enough though. there should be some rust and blood smears, etc, broken glass
     
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    is that your fiance? :naughty:
     
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    I want to know what you did to add that fake smoke.
     
  13. Devin

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    Just stupid ass photoshop brushes. It's rather lame. Thanks though guys lol
     
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    quid I Piss Excellence OT Supporter

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    she looks like a total junkie in the first one...
     
  15. Datass

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    nom nom nom nom ur avatar
     

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