i didnt know if this was best suited for the vag or here, so i figured id post in both, to get more responses (yet while keeping it out of OT because i know i would probably just catch a bunch of shit for it ) so im laying in bed, and these words just kinda came to me and wrote themselves out. usually if/when i write poetry, i feel like i have to have it rhyme. this came out, and it didnt matter that it didnt rhyme. i dont know if it is any good, or if i should give it to the girl it pertains to (yes, same one from the last couple posts in here.) i dont know if i should classify it as a poem or letter. and my mind starts wandering, so i put the thoughts down, kinda into words kinda into a 'poem' but it doesnt really rhyme. wanna hear? A thousand words couldn’t paint a picture To capture your unmatched beauty. As I lay here writing this out by candlelight My mind is bombarded with thoughts of you Thoughts of a past, that was filled with so much confusion Did it ever become reality? A present, while still full of hope, Is starting to see, but still reject the ideas that send tremors through my tender heart. A future, while for the most part dim, At times my heart finds a glimmer of hope to hold onto With unimaginable strength, fights off the darkness that is ever closing in. Until my heart can no longer withstand, and the hope is overcome. thoughts?