A&P Hows my Post work?

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  1. turbodude

    turbodude Just a photographer OT Supporter

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    I want to know if my post work is subtle enough. Did a good amount of De-wrinkling and also thinning out the face, as well as "popping" the image. This is my first real try at PP, so let me know. My objective was to make my aunt look younger and slimer.


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    Before picture was right out of the cam.
     
  2. OlafBeserka

    OlafBeserka girls pee pee when they see me OT Supporter

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    Looks good. I like it. The colors look better and they are more natural.
     
  3. Wolf68k

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    The ends of the scarf look cartoonish
     
  4. adamlewis88

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    Ill agree the scarf looks a little too much but you brought a lot back to the blacks and I personally like that. Also, not to be mean, but if youre going to go through the trouble of de-wrinkling, maybe you could fix the teeth too :hs:
     
  5. turbodude

    turbodude Just a photographer OT Supporter

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    i dont want it to look fake, she just wanted some years off. so i didnt do the teeth, also i never knew what her teeth looked like when they were good, since when she was living in vietnam she had them blackened.
     
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    nice, not overdone.
     
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    looks good. blacken her teeth then :o
     
  8. Bowzyr

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    is it just me or do her shoulders look more broad in the after?

    Pretty good work though..
     
  9. turbodude

    turbodude Just a photographer OT Supporter

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    it was cropped a bit.
     
  10. mobbarley

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    just remove the dark areas of the teeth that look like rot, dont go crazy.
     
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    What do you mean, "blackened"?
     
  12. mobbarley

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    oh i didn't notice that...

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    didnt know this existed
     
  13. OlafBeserka

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    I'd take that red piece of meat out between her front middle teeth
     
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    dont forget her hands. otherwise nice job. i think whitening her teeth would have been better considering thats what most ppl like
     
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    I think the eyes are too dark on the after pic. It looks like she's wearing way too much eye liner or something. Might want to pull back and return that sparkle to them.
     

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