WEB How does this splash/header look? *pic*

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  1. shaitaan

    shaitaan New Member

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    replacing this:


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  2. Browning

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    looks a little plain like it's missing something
     
  3. Browning

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    use the font from and include the first couple sentences from the old one.
     
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    Very good, stat your value proposition and what they can do very clearly and rid the clutter, looks like you hit that exactly. As always, test variances
     
  5. kingtoad

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    The call to action is stronger but it does look like it's missing something.
     
  6. shaitaan

    shaitaan New Member

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    hmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmm. i wonder what i'm missing :hsd:
     
  7. shaitaan

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    I'll be M/V testing though with website optimizer
     
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    The shadow around the screenshots looks weird. Try to get better screens
     
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  10. Swift

    Swift http://www.bounceweb.com

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    I would keep the ZDNet review (credibility), but I like how there is the big download button. Good stuff :big grin:
     
  11. shaitaan

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    fuckin vista Aero adds that :rofl: good point though :hsd:
     
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    the old one looks more prof
     
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    +1

    While it would be redundant to use the banner you made in the screenshot as well, I think it would it add legitimacy if it were of the actual try it/buy it buttons. 'Fuck yes, this shit is so good at web graphics that we use it ourselves!'
     
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    your site takes forever to load man...

    i like the old one better, but use the new button on the right with the recommendation from that blog post intrktevo posted.
     
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    i know, it's that jquery carousel :( im stripping that out....
     
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    use a cooler graphic in your example header. Not just "Hello" and some weak gradient.

    No one wants to buy software that takes their website back in time 10 years.
     
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    dot
     
  19. shaitaan

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    ok, so following up on this - I ran both using Website Optimizer, and the new one did 26% WORSE than the old one :o


    go figure. Website Optimizer ftw.
     
  20. waffler

    waffler Errrbuddy in this bitch get tipsy

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    put the zdnet review over the screenshots on the new one
     
  21. shaitaan

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    Nice boobies, dumpy dooby :eek3:
     
  22. hank85

    hank85 sudo shred /dev/sda -f -v -z --iterations=6

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    Try adding a greyscale logo for the product (or anything else that you think might work) with low opacity/fill under the text on the left side.

    The plainness is from that.
     
  23. Phasm

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    NO ONE ASKED YOU FAGGOT.
     
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    you're never online bro
     

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