A&P Give me your thoughts on this one....taken in hawaii

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  1. SpiderOnTheFloor

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    City of Kona on the Big Island

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  2. Bowzyr

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    hmm.. doesn't really do much for me.. can't put my finger on what it is though... Exposure is fine.. I think it's a composition issue... no real subject either and there is nothing really spectacular to draw your attention.. i dono..

    That black thing in the bottom left is kind of distracting too.
     
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    I think little things like that make it interesting
     
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    I really like this actually. What kind of lens? The concrete barrier wall makes the photo IMO. It separates the water from the mountains in the background. Making it seem really cool.
     
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    I know where that's at!!!

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    I was sitting on that very ledge :bowdown:
     
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    I like it the only thing would make it cooler if people were sitting off the ledge :o
     
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    It kind of just looks like any old snap shot. Could have taken it without even looking through the eye piece. I would have rather seen either more of the water or more of the street.
     
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    if it was taken from the beach with that guy in the water in the forground maybe... it does seem to be a composition issue because the colors are great.
     
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    theres no subject. kinda boring
     
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    canon 24-105
     
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    nicely exposed, but boring because it's...just any other holiday shot.
     
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    I believe thats called "dig me beach." Starting point of the Ironman Traithalon.

    Nice exposure but I agree with the fact that it needs a little more order to the image. I would try cropping out the power pole and just leave the palms and beach.

    edit: that way the wall draws your eye all the way into the chapel on the horizon.
     
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    rule of 3rds, lol, naw, really, pan that shit over horizontally one way or the other

    the way you have it, the wall just goes straight off into the very middle
     

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