WEB First landing page ever

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  1. Browning

    Browning Active Member

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    yay or nay?

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  2. tryfuhl

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    aliens stole my ID
     
  3. Browning

    Browning Active Member

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    is is a bad one? I found it online and changed it a bit:o
     
  4. Browning

    Browning Active Member

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    added another I think I like better:o
     
  5. hank85

    hank85 sudo shred /dev/sda -f -v -z --iterations=6

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    I dig it, the only thing I don't like is the GET IT FREE NOW button..
     
  6. Browning

    Browning Active Member

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    that's the banner for the campaign:hsd:
     
  7. Phasm

    Phasm OT Supporter

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    That button needs to be the first thing I see when I go to your page. You want your call to action to be extremely prominent.
     
  8. Browning

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    Phasm OT Supporter

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    the orange button is much, much better :bigthumb:
     
  10. Browning

    Browning Active Member

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    I think I'm done with it:dunno:


    Should I ditch the

    "** For the Special Offer, you will receive 7 days of FREE credit monitoring, then the monthly fee is $14.95 each month. Credit reporting agencies are required by law to give you a copy of your credit record upon request, at no charge or for a nominal fee."

    shit at the bottom?
     
  11. Krakerjak

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    Do you really need the arrow above the bar graph?

    I think it will look better with just the question above
    and the poor shifted down to just above the red bar

    and it also doesnt really follow the good/poor/excellent rating on the block ad
     
  12. Browning

    Browning Active Member

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    I'll play with it and see how it looks.
     
  13. kingtoad

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    Need full size screenshot.
     
  14. JesterFX

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    This.

    And bigger, and even MORE calls to action. And of course be sure to keep all the various versions and test each one to really find out which is best. It's not usually just about how "good" the page looks so don't assume great design is the most important factor. It can help with making "you" seem more legit but doesn't mean it will help your CTR/conversions.

    Don't forget to test/use the basic emotional tactics, like fear, for example. Adding a short line about why they should be worried and why they need to check their credit NOW can be a big motivator.

    Also test with adding more text...such at bullet points. Why is making sure your credit is good important? Not just important for credit card apps, car loans, mortgages and such but also important because it's used more and more for job applications and such. You are targeting people who should be worried about their credit and monetary issues which are probably also a bit sketchy about the job market and unemployment rate. Some may be looking for a job and not realize that companies do credit checks for some jobs...just an example of some highlights/bullet points you can work on and test to see if it helps increase conversions.
     
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    tryfuhl New Member

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    no prob with that if you ask me, though it needs to be more prominent
     
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    alien yoga doesnt work well for credit ad.. is there a reason you used him?

    use a stock photo of some happy people who just found out they have good credit

    too much white space. most people look at things for 5 seconds or less.
     
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    area51.php
     
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    yours does not do this.

    I saw the page and thought where the fuck do I go.
     
  19. Mikenotmike

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    i like it
     
  20. Browning

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    motherfucker I love your posts:bowdown: Now you have me debating on scrapping it and starting over

    I'm not a designer and found it on google:dunno: Not sure where to find a gorgeous blond that would work better:o



    nationacreditreport.info
     
  21. Browning

    Browning Active Member

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    got rid of the alien

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    working on a new ad for the blue section now. I shouldn't have to worry about getting into trouble if I make my own banner for the campaign will I?
     
  22. Browning

    Browning Active Member

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    I think I'm happy with it now. Better? :o

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  23. thomor25

    thomor25 I make money online....

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    looks good
    add an arrow heading towards the click herbutton going from the people to the button
     
  24. Browning

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    I would have to make the button smaller:o
     
  25. airbball23

    airbball23 Rent this Space only $5/mnth

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    the couple look a little creepy or at least the way the girl is sitting on the guy lol
     

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