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  1. Tonster MBA

    Tonster MBA OT'r of the Year 2013 OT Supporter

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    Did i do anything wrong?

    Critique me!
     
  2. White Stormy

    White Stormy Take that, subspace!

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    Camera Make = NIKON CORPORATION

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    I like it.
     
  4. S4SHIZL

    S4SHIZL Evo crew

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    Im not a professional, but it looks awesome I think.
     
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    :werd: I didnt even look at the photo after seeing that
     
  6. Tonster MBA

    Tonster MBA OT'r of the Year 2013 OT Supporter

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  7. Tonster MBA

    Tonster MBA OT'r of the Year 2013 OT Supporter

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    neat shot, two questions...
    why is the guy standing there? he seems in the way.
    why did you shoot directly into the sun?
     
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    besides teh glare, awesome shot IMO
     
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    I like the direct shot into the sun...

    why is the guy dancing in the background??? Looks like he fell and is trying to walk it off...

    It would be cool as shit if he was doing that and the board was upside down or broke or something....
     
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    Main subject is centered. :dunno:
     
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    Is he playing hackey sack?
     
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    kristin my dog > *

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    I like it
     
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    foreground looks underexposed since you have the sun in the frame.

    great concept though
     
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    :werd: a little underexposed and bland, up the saturation a bit in photoshop in the foreground...
     
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    ....he's not dancing; he's juggling a soccer ball with his knees.....which is cool and fine except you're mixing soccer with an old skate board...so your theme is in the middle....you should either keep the soccer theme and replace the skateboard with something soccer related or you should add more subjects doing various other sports activities.....


    besides that...my only problem is that its not quite lined up with the sun...if that skateboard was only 2 inches to the left you'd be gold.
     
  17. tetsuo

    tetsuo And shepherds we shall be...

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    this strikes me as a perfect place to use a gnd filter. but i like the pic as is, without the guy in it it would be even better.
     
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    Thats not wrong :ugh:
     
  19. Tonster MBA

    Tonster MBA OT'r of the Year 2013 OT Supporter

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    Thanks for all the input !!!
     
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    Tonster MBA OT'r of the Year 2013 OT Supporter

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    I agree with this theme of both being soccer or both being skateboard - but i was jsut playing soccer and my friends skate board was lieing there and i just snapped this shot really quickly and went back to playing soccer... i never intended it to come out the way it did. lucky point and shoot maybe> :dunno:
     
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    I never said it was "wrong". Rule of thirds much? :o
     
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    STOP FIGHTING :wtc: lol not:mamoru:
     
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    I like the concept and the angle but it is underexposed.
     
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    :rofl:
     
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    DeezGst Deriffic

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