A&P Critique: Wildlife/Landscapes

Discussion in 'Lifestyle' started by Dominion, Nov 24, 2007.

  1. Dominion

    Dominion I believe you have my stapler.

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    I don't normally seek out shots like this one but sometimes I get a wild hair and decide to try and take some nice images. Good criticism is always welcome to help me improve when I get into these moods :)

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    And one non-sorta-kinda landscape :)

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  2. Bloody Sunday

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    1 - boring subject, crop it a bit
    2 - foreground is distracting
    3 - would be okay if that fog wasn't obscuring a 1/3 of the image
    4 - trees are in the way and is majorly distracting
     
  3. legendr34

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    i like the 1st one, u should crop it though
     
  4. Dominion

    Dominion I believe you have my stapler.

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    I have another of #3 I can post with more showing, unfortunately it's pretty hard to get a shot there with no fog :p

    What about the images themselves, should I play more with the settings, is there anything I should know to make them better later?
     
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    isaac86hatch This thread sucks

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  6. DrKillByDeath

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    I'd like the second one a lot more of the crow in the foreground was looking in the camera's direction.
     
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    i like the repetition, i wish you couldn't see the hill you're standingon tho
     
  8. Dominion

    Dominion I believe you have my stapler.

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    Could crop it? :dunno:
     
  9. Dominion

    Dominion I believe you have my stapler.

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    Tried for it, but every time one landed it was facing away, that one is the most I could get of one.
     

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