A&P Critique what I think is my best photograph

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  1. Yardsale

    Yardsale OT Supporter

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    Have at it :noes:
     
  2. isaac86hatch

    isaac86hatch This thread sucks

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    I have no critique. Thats a great picture. :bigthumb:
     
  3. weezerfan

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    color might work better than B&W for this pic
     
  4. Yardsale

    Yardsale OT Supporter

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    colors were equally drab and somber, almost washed out :dunno:

    I went with B/W for the contrast.
     
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    weezerfan New Member

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    post it :x:
     
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    Tomash Active Member

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    Looks OK.
     
  7. Cobber

    Cobber Wanna touch my bunny hole?

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    I don't think that is your pic... I will be looking into a couple books I have bc\ecause I know I have seen that pic before ...

    Show an unedited ver or I call :bsflag:
     
  8. Yardsale

    Yardsale OT Supporter

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    lol

    www.hirethisguy.com/photography4.html

    but yeah i'll get origs in a sec, thanks for the compliment in advance :o
     
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    this forum is retarded, if the pic isn't absolute shit it must have been photoshopped somehow or BS :o
     
  10. Yardsale

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  11. Yardsale

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    Just adjust a bit for levels but no crop or anything.

    BTW, weezerfan is right, lotta haters in here:o
     
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    looks just as good in color as b/w

    nice shot :cool:
     
  13. Christine

    Christine Give us something gruesome..

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    I think it's awesome. Black and white was a perfect choice for it.
     
  14. Tomash

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    You mean as opposed to yellow and purple?
     
  15. Yardsale

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    colorbind? :dunno:
     
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    I think its really nice, the shadow casted is a nice addition to it too, its not over his body or anything
     
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    did you post this pic a long time ago?
     
  19. CRC

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    good pic!
     
  20. Yardsale

    Yardsale OT Supporter

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    I think I may have posted it in a favorite pic thread or something. :dunno:
     
  21. it's kinda point and shoot like :hs:

    The b&w does look better though. Something just doesnt' look right with the feet :dunno:
     
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    Yardsale OT Supporter

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    He has a bit of an awkward stance, but in his defence, he was a hobo :o
     
  23. Rev. Po-Jay

    Rev. Po-Jay I like Stuff...

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    Nice Contrast. Good use of the rule of thirds. Object is moving into frame, yet again, good. I like it MUCH better in B/W, as the overall theme seems to be depression of sorts. B/W is a great medium. How about a Sepia version? How about a Full Frame (style) print?
     
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    I really like this shot
     
  25. Zepher

    Zepher Hi, I am Kimmy

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    Here is a quick 3 minute photoshop,
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