A&P critique these!!

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  1. Sirkraker

    Sirkraker New Member

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    I just got back from Paris Island. Took some shots. please critique for me.

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  2. Raindrop

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    I like the 2nd one - the statue has a bit too much shadow on it and might look tighter cropped.

    3rd one's funny & a good movement capture.

    Last one is a very nice composition but the sky's a bit washed out/overexposed for my tastes.
     
  3. Derrict

    Derrict No, I am not Amish OT Supporter

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    Fill flash on #2 would've helped eliminate some of the shadows.

    Last one I would've cropped to:
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    how do you fill flash a giant ass statue ?
     
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    Derrict No, I am not Amish OT Supporter

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    A built in flash would fill most of the shadow in that pic. An external would do it better. Only problem is the statue is metallic so it'd be a bit harsh unless bouncing it off of something or having it filtered.
     
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    not horrible. nothing catches my eye though
     
  7. 00soul

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    the out of place dark gentleman in the last pic catches my eye.
     
  8. MonkMonk

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    nice pics, feeling #2 and 4
     

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