A&P Critique these please

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  1. Cobber

    Cobber Wanna touch my bunny hole?

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    I snapped some pics of my daughters soccer game and one of the Soccer Moms asked for pics of her daughter ... let me know what you guys think of these before I send them to her.
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    I've auto leveled and auto coloured in photoshop. as well as cropped and rptated the first one and cropped and added motion blur to the kid in blue to the second pic.
    Please let me know what I could do to make these look even better.

    Thanks in advance
     
  2. Keesh

    Keesh New Member

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    I don't know if I like the blur of the kid in blue. IMO I think it would look better without the blur but I havn't seen the original so I don't really know.
     
  3. Cobber

    Cobber Wanna touch my bunny hole?

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    Ask and yee shal recieve....
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    I thought I wanted the subject to pop more than the back ground kid
     
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    Perhaps you are right. After looking at the original I tend to focus on the girl in the edited picture. I think the blur works just fine after seeing the original.
     
  5. EE CUMMINGS

    EE CUMMINGS aka RobHuang

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    i got a b0ner
     
  6. limiteD*

    limiteD* 今あいたい すぐあいたい

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    Comp is good on the first one. I'd like to see all of the soccer ball in the second.
     
  7. Cobber

    Cobber Wanna touch my bunny hole?

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    I sent them to her and she loved them ... she is having the first one printed, and framed to give to the rest of her family.

    She is having the first one mounted matted and framed for herself because she said it's one of the best pictures she has of her daughter.
     
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    That is awesome. It's always nice to be complimented for your work :)
     

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