WEB Critique my site

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  1. platinum13

    platinum13 New Member

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    Well, lately I have been working on my own website, it is a little hacking community (game hacking) not illegal hacking :p I was wondering what other people think of it :)

    the Main Site is here (Not completely done)
    the forums are here

    Remember: This is a critique, Don't post "YOUR SITE SUCKS" or "AWESOME"..

    Thank you for any advice you give..

    I read the rules and it seems that this wouldn't break it, if it does I do not mind if a mod deletes it.
     
  2. Die Antwoord

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    Captured effortlessly
    Thats the way it was
    Happened so naturally
    I did not know it was love
    The next thing I felt was
    You holding me close
    What was I gonna do?
    I let myself go

    And now were flyin through the star
    I hope this night will last forever

    Ive been waitin for you
    Its been so long
    I knew just what I would do
    When I heard your song
    Filled my heart with your bliss
    Gave me freedom
    You knew I could not resist
    I needed someone

    And now were flyin through the stars
    I hope this night will last forever
    Oh oh oh oh

    Chorus:
    Aint nobody
    Loves me better
    Makes me happy
    Makes me feel this way
    Aint nobody
    Loves me better than you

    I wait for night time to come
    And bring you to me
    Cant believe Im the one
    I was so lonely
    I feel like no one could feel
    I must be dreamin
    I want this dream to be real
    I need this feelin

    I make my wish upon a star
    And hope this night will last forever

    Chorus

    And first you put your arms around me
    Then you put your charms around me
    I cant resist this sweet surrender
    Oh my nights are warm and tender
    We stare into each others eyes
    And what we see is no surprise
    Got a feeling most with treasure
    And a love so deep we cannot measure
     
  3. platinum13

    platinum13 New Member

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    awesome site. thanks for asking me to click on google ad banners.

    i clicked 50 times.

    good times... good times.
     
  5. platinum13

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    lol.. You really like it?

    edit: Dont mind, I'm never going to reach the $100 payout
     
  6. Die Antwoord

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    That's mad against TOS son.
     
  7. platinum13

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    YOUR AWESOME SITE SUCKS
     
  9. platinum13

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    I just “broke up” with one of my friends in an email. I wasn’t going to do it like that. I was obviously grumpy when I saw him on Tuesday and he sent me a letter asking me what was wrong and telling me to ignore the email if it was none of his business. Of course, it was his business, but I didn’t think I should tell him in an email, so I didn’t answer. I was supposed to see him after class on Thursday, but he never showed. I guess I should have called him, but I didn’t since I was going to tell him to go away that day anyway. Then he wrote me an email the next morning telling me he’d stayed up all night worrying, that he knew I was upset with him on Tuesday and asking me to tell him about what he could do to help. So I wrote back and explained. And now I think I shouldn’t have. I have a tight feeling in my guts and that other feeling where my chest feels like it’s caving in.
    He’s a really smart guy, but he’s somehow gotten himself into this rut. He lives in an apartment with no furniture and no dishes. He doesn’t have a job, he just lives off student loans and recently had to borrow rent money from a relative who can’t really afford it. And yet he eats almost every meal in restaurants. He has nothing to do all the time, but doesn’t do any of his homework until the last minute. When we go out, he’s incredibly awkward and never really knows where he wants to go or what he wants to do. He doesn’t speak in groups larger than three. I have to contribute all of the energy. And he has been more possessive of me than my own boyfriend. He doesn’t seem to think there is anything wrong with this and gets pissy if his lifestyle is questioned.
    It doesn’t feel good to be around him anymore. I’m afraid it only used to because it is always interesting to get to know someone new. Then I was loyal because he was my only friend at school, and because I secretly thought I could help him get out of his rut. But then I realized that every time I talk about him to my other friends, I feel like I have to justify why I am friends with him. I don’t feel like I could invite him to anything with the other people I care about. I want to be proud of my friends, to feel like I could recommend them for a job without reservation or speak glowingly about them to other people. My boyfriend used to worry about him, but now thinks he is too loserish to be a threat.
    Or maybe I just realized that I can’t change him. He has set up his life in such a way that he is able to give himself excuses for not being everything he could be or wishes to be. He’s practically thirty years old and he has been doing this for a really long time. It was so arrogant of me to think that I could show up and change his life. Instead, he expects me to participate in the lies that allow his existence to continue. I’m supposed to believe him when he says he’s practically a genius and could produce such brilliant work. He actually got bitchy at me for not believing. But he has never given me any reason to! If a person is that lazy and puts in that little effort, it doesn’t matter how smart he is, he just won’t do or amount to anything. And I just can’t stand it anymore.
    My boyfriend thought that I should simply evade him or tell him that I need a little distance, that I should be sure not to burn my bridges, which is always my policy when dealing with acquaintances. But I felt that being a friend, I owed this guy the real deal. I just really wish he had shown up at school and I could have told him to his face. He probably would have stuttered and yelled at me, and maybe that would have helped me feel like less of a betraying villain, which is really what I am. Because, really, it sounds like I just one day decided that he wasn’t cool enough for me. And maybe that is what he will tell himself as he keeps on with the status quo. At the same time, I still secretly, arrogantly, hope that this shake-up could finally be the thing it takes for him to change his life - though I don’t know if I would “take him back” if he did change anyway.
     
  11. platinum13

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    true, I really don't know what kind of colors i should use? The site looks professional and it shouldn't..
     
  12. platinum13

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    umm, lol, random :p I read the whole thing though :big grin:
     
  13. Browning

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    group hug ftw:rofl:
     
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    maybe find a template that goes a little more with your forum? Looks like a real estate template
     
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    Finest OG #93

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    :bowdown:

    Forums look good. Now make the rest of the site follow the same style.
     
  16. platinum13

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    ok, Ill try :p
     
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    IMO, game blogs work best when they are simple. Take WoW Insider for example. It becomes complicated in each section but when you are scanning the site it is fairly simple to understand wtf it is about.
     
  18. Die Antwoord

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    av :bowrofl:
     
  19. Phasm

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    nice site, kingtoad
     
  20. Die Antwoord

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  21. RetardedMonkey

    RetardedMonkey is a retarded monkey.

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    Apparently I was the 1,000,000th visitor and won a $66 prize?

    Pay up.
     
  22. bawlinmo

    bawlinmo Neighborhood Graphic Designer

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    news link doesn't work.

    red box pic above body is too big.

    latest news seems like it should be text links, not just text...

    "This Website was Made By Card123" is gay. Remove it, or at least make the text gray and smaller.

    Logo is weak. Work on it or have someone else make one for you.

    the end.
    oh and hacking is for n00bs.
     
  23. platinum13

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    lol, Okay, Im going to start making changes this weekend...
     
  24. platinum13

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    Well I have been working on my website the whole weekend, and I changed a lot of things, Please Check it out, Im not done with all the pages, But you should get the idea :p I also change the forums a bit. So they look alike
     
  25. kingtoad

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    Game hacking is illegal hacking.
     

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