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  1. Mike4831

    Mike4831 “Dream as if you’ll live forever, live as if you’l

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    for starters, resize so they fit on the screen.

    waterfall photos rock.
     
  3. Mike4831

    Mike4831 “Dream as if you’ll live forever, live as if you’l

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    I will do that now.
     
  4. Mike4831

    Mike4831 “Dream as if you’ll live forever, live as if you’l

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    Resized.
     
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    Mike4831 “Dream as if you’ll live forever, live as if you’l

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    The lighting wasn't the best the day I took these photos.
     
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    what kinda filter are you using??? if any? composition is good.. a few things you could do in photoshop to make them better
     
  7. Mike4831

    Mike4831 “Dream as if you’ll live forever, live as if you’l

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    That looks much better. Thanks.
     
  8. mojito

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    You can always throw a little flash on there too, if the exposure is long enough and with a white subject you won't see the frozen water, just have a normalle xposed scene with the moving water, in theory :noes:
     
  9. Mike4831

    Mike4831 “Dream as if you’ll live forever, live as if you’l

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    Thanks for the advice.
     
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    some fill light would have been useful, though.
     
  11. sony

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    It won't work. :eek3:
     
  12. mojito

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    why not? if would freeze the water, but since its all the same color the movement of the long shutter speed would overpower the frozen water, again in theory
     
  13. hay112

    hay112 For every sprinkle I find I shall kill you

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    yeah, underexposed, needs a little more contrast and needs more sharpness on the rocks...
     
  14. Mike4831

    Mike4831 “Dream as if you’ll live forever, live as if you’l

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    Ok, thanks.
     
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    michael FLORIDA > *

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    just increase the saturation on acr's, it's kinda washed out
     

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