A&P critique my photo!

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  1. cftofu2k

    cftofu2k OT Supporter

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    "napa sky" @ 12mm handheld, sharpened, saturated, <clear> style setting.
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    Something is missing on the bottom.
     
  3. Hippy

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    i love love love love the colors but there isnt really anything interesting about the pick to me. i think i would have looked for a spot with no foreground so the moon was the main focus, or found something more interesting then the tops of trees and some powerlines to silouette.
     
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    here's another..
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    got a bit of flaring and it might be slightly off horizontal.. just going back to some photos with some pp.. ill post more!
     
  5. mobbarley

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    might be?

    the horizon is the first thing you notice in a shot like that. make sure it is straight.
     
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    I don't like either.


    Then again I don't like pictures without people.
     
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    Needs better composition. :hs:
     
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    the 2nd is better than the first, but both are boring.
     
  9. Jonny Chimpo

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    fixed.

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    vs origional:

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