A&P Critique my Lighting Class final

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  1. jared_IRL

    jared_IRL OT Supporter

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    4 images, based off of assignments we had during the semester. All will be printed and matted.

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  2. ace3

    ace3 mouthify my wang.

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    #3 doesn't work

    rest look good
     
  3. jared_IRL

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    fixed.

    looks like I decided to add 'jpg' to the filename... :squint:
     
  4. IntheWorks

    IntheWorks windin film.. takin pics Moderator

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    #1 is best lit IMO
    #2 could have been the best. I would have tried some cross lighting on this one, the right side is just to dark IMO
    #3&4 don't work for me... there's just to much shadow....
     
  5. FindersKeepers

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    I'm liking #1 the best

    The colors on the pills are pure and vivid, whilst the pill bottle is boring and orange as pill bottles are.

    It brings my focus to the colors and lighting more than it does the bottle.

    The others to me arent bad but are typical low light b&w's.
     
  6. jared_IRL

    jared_IRL OT Supporter

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    Yeah, the assignments for the last two sort of forced me into that.

    Single snooted light used to create mystery and deep shadow. No fill.
     
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    #1 is very nice.
    I like #2 but more contrast in the light would have been really cool.
     
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    QFT
     
  10. jared_IRL

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    dammit.

    I posted this online in 2 places, and had all of my co-workers vote, and each fucking group gave me COMPLETELY different fucking feedback.

    However, it's fucking hilarious that all 3 groups bandwagoned one specific image, even if it was a different image.

    I guess that means either they're all successful, of I fucking suck.

    ah well.
     
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    My thoughts exactly. I really like 1.
     
  12. FusionZ06

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    Exactly like I said that photography is actually stupidly subjective. Much like modeling :mamoru:
     
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    #1 is my fav, ther rest are :cool:
     
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