A&P critique my [bad?] photos v.SF :wavey:

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  1. Paul Revere

    Paul Revere OT Supporter

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    this is the second or third time i've tries manual mode on my XT. shot with a 10-22. resized in photoshop and auto levels/color/contrast applied :o

    you should be able to right click for the exif, if you have the firefox plug-in

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    2 is my favorite out of the bunch. oh, i also have the full sizes upon request :dunno:

    :hs: go easy on me, but im looking to improve...especially in the PP dept
     
  2. spizarxxx

    spizarxxx DSLR, GSD, DJ CREW & OT's Resident On Air Personal

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    you should of done a panoramic... they look okay... way too much going on i think, you would of had a better photo if you were closer to the city, just my 2 cents
     
  3. Paul Revere

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    yeah, i had my 10-22 and 50mm in my bag. i didnt really think to change lenses :doh: i do have the tamron 28-75, but thats back at school :hs:
     
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    i agree
     
  5. Paul Revere

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    i'll have to buy a bigger bag :hs:

    any tips on PP? i want to get away from the auto options.
     
  6. turbodude

    turbodude Just a photographer OT Supporter

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    rule of thirds...
     
  7. e.pie

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    look at other peoples pictures and see what you have to adjust to make yours look like them and lots of practice

    I'm still trying to learn myself, though I have improved a ton since I started
     
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    First one is decent, you should've shot it farther up like 18-20mm and less sky
     
  9. tek

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    looks like you caught sf on a good sky, last time i did a panoramic up there i was out of focus by a lot. So im waiting for blue skies
     
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    first thing i thought of too
     
  11. Paul Revere

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    i know about the rule of thirds, but it must have escaped me :o

    i'll have to go back to school to get my 28-75 and hope for another sunny day :hs:
     

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