A&P Critique my 2 new ones

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  1. BulletToothTony

    BulletToothTony This one goes to 11

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    For beginning photojournilsm. We were just supposed to show good compostion and use of rule of thirds. I rented a shitty digital slr and went to San Francisco for the day. I know there's a lot of noise.
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  2. 00soul

    00soul halfsharkalligatorhalfman

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    i like the second one. first one doesnt really do it for me for some reason
     
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    eof New Member

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    I like certain aspects of the first picture...by certain aspects I mean the massive fucking lens flare.

    Keep up the good work,
    Serendipity

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  4. mattsb2000

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    The second one is great :cool:
     
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    MonkMonk New Member

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    the second one is pretty good, the first one is not.
     
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    Why is there so much noise?
     

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