A&P couple of new s2000 shots

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  1. the Rosswog

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    Thanks for only posting two shots and not 50 for c&c. :)


    Both shots: the lighting is incomplete with a lot of the car underexposed. Actually, they both seem to be a bit underexposed overall.

    First shot: I like the composition and the crop, but the car is lost in a murky shadow. With more even light on the car this should would have really stood out. The leaves scattered on the ground should be photoshopped out (or carry a broom with you next time). I also don't like the light bloom in the upper left corner from the overhead light, and the inconsistency of the floor/cement/whatever and how it changes texture right under the rear wheel.

    Second shot: WB seems to be off, composition is pretty meh, and those two big spectral highlights on the side of the car are really distracting. Also, the car seems too close to the wall, and it's too close to dead center of the image. Overall, pretty boring.
     
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