A&P come critique postman.

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  1. postman

    postman OCfashioncore

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    thoughts and suggestions on how I could have improved upon these?!?

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  2. Airpoppoff

    Airpoppoff Vodka > Racing F1

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  3. Pineapple Devil

    Pineapple Devil beat it!

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    maybe a fillflash for the shadowed portions
     
  4. SpiderOnTheFloor

    SpiderOnTheFloor New Member

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    unless you painted those walls, i dont see any critique necessary here. you took a picture of someone elses art...congrats?
     
  5. postman

    postman OCfashioncore

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    thx for coming.
     
  6. Derrict

    Derrict No, I am not Amish OT Supporter

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    borders look fine to me
     
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    Derrict No, I am not Amish OT Supporter

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    regardless of the photo, the borders look fine.
     
  8. portajesus

    portajesus New Member

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    I'm not really one to comment, but since you asked :wavey:

    Maybe a little more angle? Straight on is kinda boring
     
  9. tenplanescrashing

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    the borders aren't the problem, fill flash isn't the problem, taking pics of someone elses art isn't the problem...the only problem is it looks like you attempted to make a photo look like your own creation when in fact you were just duplicating someone elses creation instead of telling a story from your perspective. showing the entire wall and maybe desaturating everything except those parts would have told a better story than this. im not saying this is bad, but im telling you how to sell your shot to others.
     

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