A&P City skyline help

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  1. Auspicious one

    Auspicious one New Member

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    So i took this pic of my skyline. I think im just overanalyizng it because i want to print it and frame it. What does the dslr crew think. This is downtown Tulsa, Oklahoma from underneath I-66 on the arkansas river.

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    and this was how far i was

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    here is another pic in downtown tulsa

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    I think you need to crop and do some adjusting... here's my attempt on cleaning it up and giving it a more vivid color.

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    Yeah...definitly need to work on framing. Maybe get closer... :dunno:
     
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    yeah i have a version of the letterbox i did i might do that instead do you think that would look better?
     
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    I think for the size of the city in the original, a letterbox style looks better... too much black at the top and bottom.
     
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    ok now that that's settle what do you think of the composition?
     
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    Bdog ...but do I really care?

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    I like the color and exposure, but it seems too centered. It is a skyline pic and that's the way they usually are though. I did a crop and have it slightly centered to the left. I'm by far no expert, but this is what I like.

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    to me it looks like it needs a slight rotation (right side up) to straighten the horizon
     
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    just make sure your horizon like is perfect, crop it, center it and you'll be good.
     
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    I would invert it and make everything white...trust me
     
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    k i thought so
     
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    :werd:

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    need to be closer or zoom in
     

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