A&P Can finally post pics so... Please C&C

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  1. looslip

    looslip New Member

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    Can't sleep so I decided to mess around in the dark...

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    2. I wish I had something that made better circles...
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    My band was doing a music video so I decided to bring my camera along since there was lighting set up...
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    8. Used an PS action on this one
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    Tear 'em apart OTAP... :noes:
     
  2. xSteveO

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    IMO, most of them look like snapshots
     
  3. MSIGuy

    MSIGuy om nom nom nom!

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    I'm confused.
     
  4. looslip

    looslip New Member

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    So SteveO, you're saying my composition sucks?

    MSI, what are you confused about?
     
  5. Lol McRofles

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    1. Can't really tell what it says. HAHA? I'm guessing.
    2. Could have been more interesting, random light circles?
    3. Lens flare out of nowhere, unless that's a bright streetlight on.
    4. Looks like a OOF snapshot
    5. Is a snapshot
    6 & 7. Cool concept, background colors are kind of boring though
    8. Another OOF snapshot
     
  6. Drunken Karnie Midget

    Drunken Karnie Midget In Yeo We Trust, All Others Pay Cash OT Supporter

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    1 Ditch the light painting, remove the snowboard coffe table, crop closer, and it might make for a decent abstract.
    2 again ditch the light painting, add a subject... do something with the circular windows perhaps.
    3 composition again. Move right, so you're looking through the rings, slightly off center to see that there are a series of them.
    4 Part of your lighting setup is in the shot, and your subject is badly out of focus. to top it all off, her hand is making a horrid shadow on her face, but at this point, it's just being nitpicky.
    5 "Hey billy, look over here!"
    6/7 Neat concept, bg colors are too drab, and overall they look a little flat.
    8 Ditch the action, and reprocess. The actions that were used were murder on her face. Closer crop, and yeah, she's a bit oof.
     
  7. ThexToddster

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  8. looslip

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    Thanks Lol Mcrofls and sociopath for the detail. I appreciate the input from everyone tho. I'm still learnin tho so more to come.
     
  9. 1992 240SX

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    I like the concept of the people holding on to the poll but the execution needs help. Have a fan, people with looser clothing, less distracting background, etc.
     

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