A&P ATTN Luciano, that projec thing you wanted

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  1. The_Eagle_Has_Landed

    The_Eagle_Has_Landed New Member

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    well this is my version of it. if you want the high res one pm me


    the one thing that fucked up is that each image has to be moved over to the right 3/4 inch to line up the flower, but i think it looks cooler that way rather than a strait line

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  2. mucky

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    The exposures and focusing don't match and the frames don't line up even if you progressively move them to the right. :hsugh:
     
  3. The_Eagle_Has_Landed

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    the flower is is in focus, the background is not the same focus because the higher the picture the farther the background, if you look at the top pic the backgroung is the most out of focus but when you fallow the pics down the focus progresavly (sp) changes to focus. they don't have to line up to the t, because the are going in frames hung on a wall with space between them so that won't make much of a difference
     
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  4. mucky

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    Look at the first and second picture. Look at the stem and the bottom leaf. The exposure and focusing are way disconnected. Not to mention the stem doesn't line up in reference to the leaf.

    For the second and third picture, the exposure and focusing is better, but still needs work. The cropping needs attention too. At the bottom of the second picture, you see the tip of one of the grass and the small fallen leaf on the ground. The third picture has the full grass stem and the leaf in it too. You can crop out the second picture, but the problem is, the right leave on the flower won't flow correctly between the second and third picture.

    Even if they are spaced with a frame separating these photos, these 3 photos don't flow very good.
     
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  5. mucky

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    [​IMG] <---exposure and focusing on stem is bad with next frame
    ....[​IMG] <---Needs work on cropping
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  6. mucky

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    Even with all those technical comments aside, I forgot to mention the composition and picture is quite boring and very uninteresting. And I'm saying this in a nice way.
     
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    how are you going to make a flower not boring. its a flower what are you going to do to it to make it more than it is
     
  8. The_Eagle_Has_Landed

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    why did this get you so heated, its just a picture
     
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    one on one convo = PM feature
     
  10. mucky

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    heated? :ugh: I was only throwing you some constructive criticism.
     
  11. D_Wade

    D_Wade Yeah, that was nice...now you should get going

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    Eagle,

    Could I also please get copies of the high-res versions...

    thanks
     
  12. eof

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    I would rather gargle and rinse with year old urine than look at another one of your shitty flower pictures. :o
     
  13. The_Eagle_Has_Landed

    The_Eagle_Has_Landed New Member

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    i know it was just constructive criticism but it seemed like you took it very personaly that my pictures sucked, i don't mind the criticism constructive or not,
     
  14. The_Eagle_Has_Landed

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    what with all the piss comments coming from you lately
     
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    light is way to harsh imo
     

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