A&P Advice and C&C of PP on three images

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  1. Perkwunos

    Perkwunos Dog Bones OT Supporter

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    I was curious if I could get some advice or C&C on PP of these three images, each is presented before and after in light room, I can upload the raw files if anyone would like that. I thought the pictures where "Good" compositionaly and technically, but sometimes OT finds problems i don;t, so let em know on that too.
    1-Before PP
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    1-After PP
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    2-Before PP
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    2-After PP
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    3-Before PP
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    3-After PP
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  2. robz

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    the first girl is :eek3:
    moore
     
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    gtfo :rofl:
     
  4. xenon supra

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    I think they pictures are pretty good.

    I think your PP is nice, and not overdone.

    I only didn't like that you removed the toothpick looking thing in #3, i think it was nice and kept my eye in the frame.
     
  5. Perkwunos

    Perkwunos Dog Bones OT Supporter

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    Really, i thought it was distracting, thanks for the advice though, i somewhat see what you are saying.
     
  6. Dwight Schrute

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    I think the yellow tint in #1 and #2 looks unnatural.

    You can see marks from the healing brush or whatever you used to remove the toothpick in #3.
     
  7. robz

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    :dunno:
     
  8. Perkwunos

    Perkwunos Dog Bones OT Supporter

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    Does anyone else agree or disagree with this, I thought it made the pictures look warm, it could just be your monitor, this shit is so fucked up between my sync master, view sonic and mac monitor that I gave up, and just trust the mac book pro's monitor.
     
  9. Girth

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    here's my rendition of the first one...

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  10. 1992 240SX

    1992 240SX New Member

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    I like the slight tint. Gives mood to the photos, whereas the original ones look cold in mood and tint.
     
  11. Girth

    Girth ¯\_(ツ)_/¯ OT Supporter

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    and the second one...

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  12. siniquezu

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    maybe adjust her teeth but looks good.
     
  13. 1992 240SX

    1992 240SX New Member

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    Too harsh, Girth. The contrast is too extreme on your edits, to the point where the highlights look blown.
     
  14. Perkwunos

    Perkwunos Dog Bones OT Supporter

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    I like it but her face seems a little blown out almost, I liek the contrast/saturation, can you tell me what you did?
     
  15. wheresthejon

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    i have to overexpose to make up for the blemishes...or spend 3 minutes in PS which I won't do..but here's my take
     

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