A&P a little free verse poetry i wrote...im just curious if anyone can relate to it

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  1. cryptonomicon

    cryptonomicon verba volant, scripta manent

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    a glimpse of insanity
    ...this is, amazing
    i descended into confusion, emerged reborn...
    the auditory hallucinations? the music?
    IS THIS REAL?
    how do I know?
    i care so much, i do
    in this, my moment of sheer INSANITY.
    i have descended into this realm. fear of injury, illness, death, bind my soul
    i scream that i have no one with whom i might share this blessed moment.
    remember that voyage? the journeyman has returned.
    i force myself now to maintain this focus,
    for i cannot remember where my thoughts led me to seconds ago.
    am i going to die?
    this is it.
    this is that near death experience-
    everyone hears about it-
    and then:
    it is transcribed like it is simply history;
    and you read about it, and recall it in your mind;
    and you imagine it would never happen to someone you know,
    then from those amongst you, they emerge changed
    and reborn...
     
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    chlywly Active Member

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    awesome :)
     
  3. dannycarey

    dannycarey New Member

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    you know what this just turned into, bitches: poetry post for On-Topic poetry, whatever that means...


    - Prior to Oblivion -
    All is a travesty, all calls one’s fate,
    Step out from the heat and secure your mate,
    Nothing remembered, yet nothing forgot,
    Nothing new, 'cause everything rots,
    All are connected, an island’s attached,
    All just one, once surface is scratched,
    The pleadings of madness, the tempting fertility,
    We must go beyond ourselves, prior to oblivion.
     
  4. chlywly

    chlywly Active Member

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    Nice, Im going to write some :p
     
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    This forum isnt' about free verse poetry. We do serious discussions and debates, not talent shows.

    edit: so im moving it to art & photography at the thread starter's request
     
  6. familyguy101

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    tenacious memories, fading and losing
    my dear krista
    baby, i wanna make you feel hot

    don't mistake my time for play
    your hair smells natural
    like a waterfall unseen
    you speak to me krist
    in the deepest depths of my dream
    baby, i wanna make you feel hot

    can you live up to
    the burden awaits
    will i see you again
    at heaven's gate
    baby, you know what i wanna do

    find me the light
    and i'll show you the path
    you don't know
    you started me on this wrath
    will i ever tell you
    do i have what it takes
    everything is broken up, and dances
    like us.....


    poetry is hard, and i'm a coward.
     

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